JosSamLoh

Now this is good! Way past newbie standards. Hope to see more high quality stuff like this from you!

Don't ask questions just watch :3

18 minutes ago, Shane said:

The reflection on the floor is too reflecting.

ugh the cleaner cleaned it too much >:c

Just now, Iron431 said:

How'd you make the glass shadow have the red and blue thing?

Spot Lights

Nice, textures are good but the lighting seems a bit too plain

I feel like you took inspiration from my wallpaper:

On-topic: I love the extrusions, the wall and the lighting, it's just so good

2 minutes ago, HeYoNia said:

I ate your Spaghetti.

Give it back 

Where's my spaghetti?

It's sooo gooooooooooood

The character and creepers could use some better posing, lighting could be better. Also you can make the scenery bigger, it seems too small. The pickaxe is clipping through the characters head and you can upgrade for free to remove that watermark. Oh and the pupils aren't looking at the diamond, make them look at the diamond.

Just now, Mobdestoryer said:

Oh ok thanks Man I had no idea you used those I thought you used trash cans and toilet water

that's what I thought at first, but then I remembered I used those

50 minutes ago, MichTheElf said:

Cool it looks amazing Jos

 

thanks!

3 minutes ago, Mobdestoryer said:

OH MY ******* GOD THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING **** I'VE EVER SEEN HOW THE **** DID YOU DO THIS!

I forgot, I think I used some cubes and surfaces, oh and some cylinders

1 minute ago, UnmutEMC said:

I think the damage on the wall could've been more detailed if compared to the pieces on the ground.

The wires on the light is a little too thicc. The light bulb(is that what its called?) should've been more detailed as well, right now it's just... a cube. And also if the wires were cut off, how is the light still on?

The small lamp is clipping through the broken pieces.

The textures for the fences both on the left and the right are too repetitive. You should make them having a slightly different size, position, and rotation to give them more dynamic look.

Fire texture seems a bit odd in my opinion. Also, you might want to pick a better smoke texture to hide/reduce the alpha glitches there as well.

The broken windows in the house are... uh, weird. Have you tried making a texture for it instead of using cubes yet?

Thanks for all that, I'll use this to improve in the future! And no I haven't tried making a texture for it, I haven't thought of doing that.

2 minutes ago, UnmutEMC said:

There are what I could think of as of now. I'm dying now, It's five am, gtg bai

oke cya :3

Just now, Iron431 said:

Im guessing the smoke is a bunch of surfaces? I'd be awesome if it was an actual particle.

if it was a particle the render depth would all be the same and there will be a lot of alpha glitches

1 minute ago, UnmutEMC said:

Pruutty hot I'd say :3

However, I do see something that maybe you could've done a little bit better. Do you want a bit of advice and suggestion?

Gimme all of the criticism ples 

move the folder where you want the character to be and reset everything else's positions so the character is where the folder is but in the position you want it to be in

4 hours ago, TheXKing360 said:

sup gays 

Hi again

make the DOF blur size 1%, change the ambient colour, sunlight colour and add some scenery

I like the idea! I might join

9 minutes ago, Pharien said:

Don't you just love how people always assume things?

people assume these things because you make it seem like the things people are assuming are true ARE true