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Skjold

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Hello, hello!

Welcome to your new summer jo- wait..

Tell me what you think.

Please do tear this wallpaper appart piece for piece. Be as harsh you can.

And lets not get ahead and get offtopic in the comments.. You know who you are. *stares*

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(Again. Feedback. Give it. >dv7kSI6.gif

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4 minutes ago, MineRocker Animations said:

Well.. If it makes you feel better.. I feel like the blur in the distance is a bit too much.. it hides away the clouds which would look better if they were a bit more visible.

.. there you go! Happy now? xD

Happy as a meal.. even though those meals just make you obese, not happy.

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3 minutes ago, Emanatronic said:

I love how you personalized the heights of the blocks on that peak. You even placed snow on the Dummy.

The scene is great, well-proportioned, and overall I really feel like I'm there.  :3

But you're looking for hardcore critique, so I'll call in the harshest guy I know: @SDWAN.  :D 

Thanks.. now tell me something you dont quite like/could be better about it. Remember.. I don't use aftereffects or photoshop.

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Just now, Skjold said:

Thanks.. now tell me something you dont quite like/could be better about it. Remember.. I don't use aftereffects or photoshop.

Well... The normal-sized block clipping through the dummy to signify partial burial could have smaller cube particles around the area of clipping so it looks more professional.  :D 

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Let me just put up a verdict over here before I do anything : 8.5/10

Pros

+Nice amount of detail

+the use of your dummy rig because it really hasn't been used in that much stuff other than previews

+the edited snow particles blends in decently( it's not the best, but decent)

Cons

-The way the focused part blends with the background is shifting the perspective

- Why u gotta be slappin your watermark in that spot

-Edit the ssao to match the scene, because the way it looks there is a little meh

-You gotta edit the background properties abit man

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1 minute ago, KindZax said:

is there a unedited version?

No. The edit is part of the original intention of the image so giving an unedited version would be like hanging a half painting onto the wall - ugly

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Just now, ViniciusbrMaster said:

what....feedback is likes right? why i get warning point when i want likes?

@Frossa....?

Feedback is criticism, not likes.

 

Well, my one criticism is that the dummy's immersion into the snow is a bit off, and I'm saying this as someone who has been fully immersed in snow before (Newfie winters <3).

So maybe try to make it look like there was some sort of struggle, or just something more dynamic, you don't just.... sit.

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4 minutes ago, SDWAN said:

- Why u gotta be slappin your watermark in that spot

-You gotta edit the background properties abit man

Please, do tell me more. Go into detail.

-I put my watermark there so people cant just crop it out or easily paint over it.

-What do you mean by editing the background properties? Explain.

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22 minutes ago, ViniciusbrMaster said:

what....feedback is likes right? why i get warning point when i want likes?

@Frossa....?

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This is why i'm saying you need to work on your english.

LOOK UP THE WORD BEFORE MAKING A STUPID COMMENT ABOUT IT.

Just now, SDWAN said:

Scrub boi

-snip-

Oh, Have I fiddled around with those for a while.. If you look closely, the fog is actually raised all the way up to the brim of the mountain. And I disabled clouds and stuff. So I'd say I've went as far as you can without turning into a @Keep on Chucking.

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12 minutes ago, Skjold said:

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This is why i'm saying you need to work on your english.

LOOK UP THE WORD BEFORE MAKING A STUPID COMMENT ABOUT IT.

Oh, Have I fiddled around with those for a while.. If you look closely, the fog is actually raised all the way up to the brim of the mountain. And I disabled clouds and stuff. So I'd say I've went as far as you can without turning into a @Keep on Chucking.

Its alright if you don't want to be Yuri's pet. don't complain about it. EMBRACE IT

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