TheJeweledWolf

Not bad! If you use glow (and make sure the box “only render glow” (I think) is checked) it’ll soften the edges. Then you can play with camera effects to change things up a little.

His pose doesn’t look very realistic, or balanced at all. If someone were to actually stand like that, they’d fall. I also don’t know why, but his left arm (our right) looks... wrong. I’m not sure what’s throwing me off there. The lighting is okay, but still fairly bland. So is the background. In light of your last wallpaper, I’d say he should be walking across a wire (or clothesline) in a city or something. It may make the wallpaper less... boring. You’re getting better though, keep going!

Fog by itself won’t create a light ray in Mine-imator (at least, not that I remember. I haven’t been able to use it recently). There are tutorials you can find on YouTube that’ll teach you how to do it which will probably explain it better than I could. The general idea is to use a surface or cube with a plain white gradient texture. If you position it where you want the light ray to be, then go into settings and make it glow only, it’ll become your light ray. You can edit colors, glow size, effects, etc to give it the look you want. Again, I’m not the best at explaining these types of things so I definitely recommend you find a tutorial on YouTube.

Thanks! I don’t think it was a compliment...

It looks like you used default night setting for lighting (which is never good for renders) and put a single spotlight focused on the window. It's pretty bland for lighting and how dim it is makes it almost impossible to see the character (and main focus) of the wallpaper. So yeah, lighting could use work. From what I can see it's not bad other than what I pointed out.

Not bad for a beginner. The main things that need improvement are lighting and posing. Flatlands can be covered with downloaded schematics so it's not a big deal

It looks a bit stiff, and the bloom is a bit too intense (it kind hurts my eyes). Adding a bit more movement, even just breathing, would go a long way.

The axe went through the block INSTANT DOWNVOTE! I'm kidding I swear. Gj

You could also bring in fog a bit to hide the edge, it's what I typically do on a slow PC. Or you could import trees to make it look like there's a thick Forest at the edge so it's not as visible. Altogether I completely agree with redwoods.

Holy crap This is amazing

Where's the "Meh" option on having Sharp as the main villian?

Cliche "Wake up and everything is wonderful, until I walk outside the door" scene.

God, I can never remember that guy's name!

Does this also mean you're new to MI? If so, my God it's amazing. Anyway, welcome to the forums!

The image isn't working for me

I wasn't expecting it.

The first gunshot actually scared me ?

Yeah, this roleplay is dead. We made a new server beside the one above dedicated to Roleplay. If you'd like to join it, here's the new link: https://discord.gg/KSTNCww

Great idea, but you could work on lighting and camera effects. Posing could use some work, because right now it's just weird and awkward. For lighting, my best recommendation for improving is to watch tutorials on YouTube. For camera effects, just play around a bit more. In my opinion, the background is too blurred. That's a personal opinion, but the blur in the background of the last image is sudden. It's kind of hard to get rid of that in Mine-imator, so I understand not being able to. For posing, again, look at tutorials. I'm no expert myself, but you can also find references online and try to copy them in Mine-imator.

I love the lighting on this! Happy (late) Fourth of July!