So feedback...
1. I recommend to use some map from Planet Minecraft, Mine-Imator templates are not good. They're too small and flatland behind it is terrible
2. I have really useful help for you: "Never use only DoF (Depth of Field), use it with some other effects or don't use it at all"
3. Camera is too close and animation feels too much linear
4. For that text at the end, I would personally use After Effects to animate it and in some editing program like Premiere pro (or DaVinci Resolve for the text and editing at once <- that's free version)
I hope it helps.