helx First Fight Test (Please Bare With Me)

[Lazii 83]

Sorry I Know I Missed A Lot But It's Not The Real One 
(It's Gonna Be Longer And Better) 
-Using Skibbz Facial Rig-

Edited October 17, 2016 by Lazii

[Game Teller 105]

ummm , i didn't really understand it . 

[NotChris 2.8k]

"20 likes to see real one"

sorry pal. that ain't gonna happen.

[Lazii 83]

3 minutes ago, Game Teller said:

ummm , i didn't really understand it . 

Its A Training Session Between brothers

 

[Lazii 83]

16 minutes ago, Pigeon_ said:

"20 likes to see real one"

sorry pal. that ain't gonna happen.

Im talking bout on youtube and we'll see

[ShadowGMC 553]

12 minutes ago, Lazii said:

Im talking bout on youtube and we'll see

for an animation like this, i dont think it will get to 20 likes.

[Klyxz 383]

2 hours ago, Lazii said:

Im talking bout on youtube and we'll see

Yeah, still a big no.

[Nimi 8.3k]

Can I have credit for the mouth rig?

[Skjold 7.6k]

This is bad. But not bad enough to deserve dislikes. Come on people.

[MagicTurtle985 32]

Needs work.

[Lazii 83]

27 minutes ago, Nimi said:

Can I have credit for the mouth rig?

Its Skibbz Facial Rig And If U Helped Sorry I didn't Know

[Nimi 8.3k]

9 minutes ago, Lazii said:

Its Skibbz Facial Rig And If U Helped Sorry I didn't Know

Yeah, I did help. He used my mouth rig, and built off of it and made his facial rig.(It should have been named 'Nimi's mouth rig' in his facial rig.)

[Lazii 83]

Ohh Yeah Sorry

1 minute ago, Nimi said:

Yeah, I did help. He used my mouth rig, and built off of it and made his facial rig.(It should have been named 'Nimi's mouth rig' in his facial rig.)

 

3 minutes ago, Nimi said:

Yeah, I did help. He used my mouth rig, and built off of it and made his facial rig.(It should have been named 'Nimi's mouth rig' in his facial rig.)

If You Have A You Want Me To Put It In The Descriptsion

[[GMK]animations 17]

20 likes is alot

Other than the guy with a hand on his head this pretty good for a newbe

[Lazii 83]

42 minutes ago, TheShinPin said:

20 likes is alot

Other than the guy with a hand on his head this pretty good for a newbe

Thanks

[Jovan0896 666]

How about 20 dislikes.

[Pokekights 793]

20 likes isn't going to happen with this quality of work. For the record, some people won't even like it just because you said "20 likes and I'll release the full one."

Slow motion isn't a mess of ease and out, nor are fight scenes. When I used to animate, fight scenes were hard. They always are. You need to understand that using transitions for quick movements is almost never a good idea. That leads to something else, this is slow. Way too slow. And I know what you're trying to do with the explosions and whatnot, but it's not gonna work like that. The ground and the camera is gonna need some impact to themselves to simulate quick and hard movement. What's more, scenery helps. You said it was two brothers training? Put them in a dojo, what's more, make them look similar if they're brothers. The facial movements were... not good. The punches had little impact, if any. And that crash and tumble and the end seems like you never did the "ball animation." 

Afterthought, it's "bear."

Edited October 17, 2016 by Pokekights

[Lazii 83]

5 minutes ago, Pokekights said:

20 likes isn't going to happen with this quality of work. For the record, some people won't even like it just because you said "20 likes and I'll release the full one."

Slow motion isn't a mess of ease and out, nor are fight scenes. When I used to animate, fight scenes were hard. They always are. You need to understand that using transitions for quick movements is almost never a good idea. That leads to something else, this is slow. Way too slow. And I know what you're trying to do with the explosions and whatnot, but it's not gonna work like that. The ground and the camera is gonna need some impact to themselves to simulate quick and hard movement. What's more, scenery helps. You said it was two brothers training? Put them in a dojo, what's more, make them look similar if they're brothers. The facial movements were... not good. The punches had little impact, if any. And that crash and tumble and the end seems like you never did the "ball animation." 

Thanks For The Insight 100 Im Working On A Kibisa Vs Mario World One Rn Ohh And There Not Blood Brothers He's Truly Jason's Brother But U Have To Wait For The Series To See What Im Talking About 

Edited October 17, 2016 by Lazii

[Cube Productions 1.1k]

Bad. But as @Skjold said this is not enough for any dislikes. Come on, guys. What's up with YOU?

[-(Retro)- 394]

On 10/17/2016 at 1:33 AM, Lazii said:

Thanks For The Insight 100 Im Working On A Kibisa Vs Mario World One Rn Ohh And There Not Blood Brothers He's Truly Jason's Brother But U Have To Wait For The Series To See What Im Talking About 

The legendary series that everyone talks about which either gets cancelled or "Episodes" are 2-4 minutes long. Good luck with that.

[Artamiel Crescent 1.5k]

hey I think it's more "dumb" explosive teleportation than fighting......don't you think?

don't be offended it's criticism

[KyodonZ 354]

This can't reach 10 likes I think,expect you are creating 10 (maybe less)accounts to like it

[Lazii 83]

16 hours ago, "Anonymous" said:

hey I think it's more "dumb" explosive teleportation than fighting......don't you think?

don't be offended it's criticism

its not even teleportation 

[Dave's Animations 378]

.... I'm gonna be honest, you're FAR from the decent fight animations... Needs lots of work. And also it has to be understandable; I have to get what kind of damage the opponent took, where and how. I'm saying this because at the first attack it looks like the hair punched his face.

BTW If you are a beginner, it is not a really good idea to start with fight animations, because they're hard to do. Just sayin'.

Edited October 25, 2016 by Dave's Animations