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  1. That's such an amazing photo of shadows
  2. You know what im done with this im leavin' the forums, see ya'll

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    2. MikTRF
    3. 9redwoods

      9redwoods

      I ain't

      I said sorry, that's what everyone was secretly asking for from me I think.

    4. Frost
  3. Okay... I'm sorry to say, but I'm going to go all out with this criticism. You need a good structure to keep going in the beginning, so here we go. I'm going to help you out with the program interface itself while I give you criticism on the actual wallpaper, too. 1. You need to make your work camera bigger. To do that, drag the edges of the surrounding tabs in. It will give you a bigger workspace. 2. In the top right of the work camera, you don't have lighting or particles enabled. You should have every box enabled except the last two. 3. Before you make your scene, you always have to find where the camera is going to go. Never make the scene before putting in the camera. 4. Why this music... It's an inappropriate song and it makes us think that you think you're good, when in reality, you need lots of improvement. 5. The posing of the characters is very weak. Try messing around with posing and get an understanding of what looks good and what doesn't. 6. Always have the camera view enabled. You might say it takes up a lot of the work camera, but if you enlarge the work camera space, you won't have a problem. One thing you might not know is that you can drag around the edges of the camera view so you can enlarge it and shrink it. 7. The lighting is very plain. It has no color and it's just inside the camera. You could have used a spotlight with a high range in the sky for more dynamic sunlight. 8. Is it supposed to look like the guy is taking a selfie? Because you can see the edge of his hand, and it ruins the effect. 9. Never use the default schematics. That's about it. I can tell you, if you listen to criticism and see examples from the community, your wallpapers will increase in quality dramatically. My wallpapers were horrible until I joined this awesome community. They gave me tips and criticism, and I learned what I did wrong. You'll get better over time, and I hope to see more wallpapers from you in the future!
  4. Ok, I have some problems with this wallpaper. Here we go: The extrudes on the character are way too extruded. It almost looks ugly that way. The posing is really weak. The body wasn't even rotated or bent at all. Also, black eye-whites are way too cliche. I've never gotten why people make the eyes black. The "corruption," or so you call it, doesn't really look the best. Maybe you could have retextured the skin itself to make it look more natural. There is literally no scenery or anything nice to look at at all. You could have given a little more randomness to the cookies' rotation. They're all conveniently looking at the camera. That's really all I have to say about this. I hope to see more wallpapers from you in the future! You'll get better with practice!
  5. It's surprising to me that no one has made just a normal bike rig/model. Could someone maybe do that?

    1. Jake_28
    2. SteveJobs

      SteveJobs

      Circles go against the LAWS of PHYSICS in Minecraft. You could have a bike with square tires and there'd be a funny animation of the bike just bobbing up and down as the wheels turn.

    3. AlfaProductions

      AlfaProductions

      I've already done one m8 ? I'm thinking about updating it so wait for me to do that.

       

  6. A yellow Volkswagon hippie van
  7. I'd join if I was creative. I need an idea.
  8. The real question you should be asking is "Can I get a Mc Pic 2???"
  9. Four seconds in, the person on the right just slid across the room without moving their legs. The movements were a bit unrealistic, but I can tell you're getting better.
  10. It's not posted in the "rigs" section, so it's not available for download. Also, @TidalWaveAD, don't post the link to the image, just post the image. No one likes clicking links. I'll do it for you.
  11. Why do people never learn to post the image instead of a link...? Also, when I try to click the link, I can't. I tried to copy it, and it said "your file was not found".
  12. I didn't say I had trouble seeing it. I just didn't understand it because the butterflies' positions were awkward and it took a second to see what was actually going on.
  13. Don't think of this as hate, It's only criticism. Here we go: Edge of the map on the left is very distracting It's very hard to see what's going on. Maybe add some night lighting. There is no sort of editing. Always edit your pictures in some way. The camera angle is very weak. I always put my cameras close to the ground looking up at the scene. I think you should, too. Upon brightening the image... I still don't have a clue what the thing is doing. Practice with different poses and make it look right. You can see blurry spots on the image. I don't know what that is, really. It can't be DOF because way in the back, the trees aren't affected. That's about it. Keep practicing and learn from criticism, and you'll get better, I promise!
  14. I still don't get what you mean. Do you mean instead of a head's texture stretching, have more pixels be generated so it doesn't look stretched? In that case, that's something you can only do in Photoshop. MI can't generate object-aware pixels and make it look good.
  15. Amazing work!!! The only thing I have to say is that it's a bit hard to see what's happening in the night scene. I figured it out once I looked at the day scene, but maybe you could put the butterflies in less awkward spots so the viewer isn't confused for the first 5 seconds upon looking at it.
  16. See, @DuallyElemental, this is why I wanted to help. But then again, you've created 3 more exactly like this one and no one said it was lazy. I don't know why this is different than the others. But still, I want to help.
  17. Amazing work. Maybe the first one could be improved a bit more, but the rest looks 100% out of MC Story Mode. Again, amazing work.
  18. That's happened to me too. There's no way to fix it. Try and work around it and make it look cool.
  19. That's a galaxy. In the animation, the whole bottom half of space was orange. I agree with that, like if you're crying or doing very detailed movements, but she used linear for mostly everything. Just raising your hand or something should always be ease in and out.
  20. Don't use linear animation for natural movement.
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