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Douya233

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  1. 10 hours ago, JB Animations said:

    Damn, That's actually the best wallpaper I've seen in a few weeks.

    Awesome Job !?

     

    9 hours ago, TheJeweledWolf said:

    ^ He is correct. Well done, I love it!

     

    7 hours ago, 9redwoods said:

    10/10 editing.

    A few things that annoy me are as follows:

    • the girl is not centered
    • the hair is clipping through the sword
    • the sword should be falling out of her hand. The hilt should be fully covered by her hand.

     

    6 hours ago, BaconSandwich said:

    Pretty great on the visuals, but I think the posing could use a bit of work as the characters seem a bit stiff. Try to have more exaggerated bends and rotation on the arms, torso and legs to emphasize whatever movement is taking place. Maybe it would help to look at a real-life reference image to get a better idea of where everything should be. I love the camera angle and the general atmosphere of the scene, tho, great job! :D

     

    5 hours ago, Skjold said:

    Pretty good.

    Thank you all for your praise and advice!

  2. 6 hours ago, BaconSandwich said:

    Pretty solid editing (I can't even edit period,)  and you managed to get pretty smooth animation for the most part, but  I think the intro is too long compared to the video itself and there were one or two parts that looked really linear (like Steve looking up after the lilypad flew up.) All in all, great first animation!

    Thanks, many people have told me about the allocation of time. And the part it's actually unnatural XD.

    5 hours ago, 9redwoods said:

    Ok, here's some criticism...

    It was kind of fast overall and it didn't give you enough time to fully understand what was going on in the scene.

    The movement of the character was very unnatural. Make slower transitions and more exaggerated believable movements.

    That's really all I have to say. Good job for a first animation, though!

    Thank u for the advice! Maybe it's because I pay too much attention to the combination of pictures and music, it moves very fast.

  3. 4 hours ago, Rollo said:

    A fine-looking edit. Good show, good show.

    thank u

    3 hours ago, WAZZL3 said:

    mobs are a little too small for me, but Good Job

    If the mobs are too big, the picture will be a bit messy XD.

    2 hours ago, YoshiHunter said:

    That is frickin' impressive! How did you do it?

    Just color the mobs and apply shadows and reflections with ps._(:з」∠)_

  4. 15 hours ago, BladerInc said:

    Is this a sniper rifle or what?

     

    ummmm,i don't know.In fact, I don’t know much about guns.

  5. 1 minute ago, BladerInc said:

    Oh, that’s actually pretty good, but use cubes instead of items

     

    I didn't use items,and they are all cubes

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