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_Blue

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  1. Alright, time to whip out my criticising pants. First off, posing. Each character does have their individual, which makes the render less bland. The posing is great but more effort can be put into it, as it is a group render. It's kinda hard to tell what each character is doing, posing shows actions, as if something is happening, a scene. I see 2 guys petting the doggo, I see the two girls on the far right just standing awkwardly looking at something. The guy in the middle planning something, the girl on the floor looking at the floor, the girl who appears happy and throwing her hands in the air for no reason and the other girl reacting to that. You get the point. Lighting, It can use some work. There is no other lightsource in the render so it is kinda bland. There is some shadows present, indicating that there is a light source, probably the TV that isn't shown. If you are adding a lightsource, make sure that it is shown in the render, like torches, ceiling lights, TV light. If the render was taking place outside a building, common sense would tell you that the lightsource is the sun, so your choice if you want the sun to show or not. But yeah, the lighting looks good enough. Scenery, It's a room, with a couch, with blocky friends sitting on it and standing next to it. The render/the room itself feels empty, maybe add some props to fill in space. K its 3:06 am, goodnight.
  2. Rip curiosity rover. can we get F's in the comments? Ontopic: I like it, I can't explain or point out anything because I like it. don't abuse my or brian's rig ever again.
  3. "Short man", very accurate.
  4. 0/10 iT dOeS nOT hAvE mE In iT jErEmY GoDaMniT, AND YOU EVEN HAVE MY RIG, S M H Ontopic: 10/10, I really love the lighting in all of them!
  5. Amazing! I really like the lightning! 9/10 Cuz I'm not in it 10/10!!
  6. Not bad! What I can say is that: 1. Posing could use some work. 2. The clouds seems close to the schematic, try raising the Y value of the clouds next time. 3. Try adding more skins/rigs, have that feeling of people around and give them their own posing and such. Lightning is good in my book, hopefully this can help!
  7. Imagine if it was all actual rigs instead of skins? In my last group wallpaper, had like 9 rigs and everyone else, skins. And a scenery, and all of it was enlarged. 6 fps I love this, especially that spiderman meme reference.
  8. 5 hours and 6 fps AND IT LOOKS BLURRY, SON OF A B- Criticism is always appreciated. If this comes out blurry when I post this, I'm sorry. I would try to get another one but the project file broke so.. Rigs/Models Used Briefcase - Skibbz's Files ( don't know where the link is for it, tried searching for it, nothing came up ) Female Holding Briefcase - @KEN990 Face and Character models. @Kysnos, @ThatGuyBrian, @ExoticBuilder Thanks for them for sending me their rigs.
  9. Amazing, truly and gloriously amazing. The series has always and will always be the videos I will rewatch anytime. I cannot wait to see what you will be making in the future!
  10. Laughed more at the ending, well done!
  11. I'd join if I knew how to animate.
  12. Thebestfreegameonsteamwithanamazingstory,youmakemesad;c
  13. Because of me you now have 501. Congrats
  14. Herobrine is daddy ? Ontopic: The darkness is well done, amazing work on that, Plus looks like a movie poster. I like it!
  15. This is one THIC C Boi of a render. @Jake_28 Its your turn, since PowerMCKing is actually the last one on the list.
  16. Yes you can, check the list at the first page, if you are on it, then wait till the person before you tags you, then it's your turn, if you're not on the list, then say you're going next after the last guy on the list.
  17. THIS IS UTTERLY AMAZING, YOU GUYS HAVE NO TASTE IN ART!111!!1!!1
  18. I did fix it, other than that some rigs weren't being shown, reason the fix.
  19. @EthanForeverAlonestop forgetting about me ;c Also when do I go? after Mineshaft Animation?
  20. pfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffft
  21. A special villager.. My first time making lightning like this, and the horrible rain. Feedback is always appreciated! @EthanForeverAlone @Jake_28 @LegendMC Richayrton ( new friend )
  22. Reminds me of a wallpaper I did way back and I made the sun so damn bright, someone posted that same gif.
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