BBruce7815 [fanart]

[Ninjabee_Redtricity 989]

Since @BBruce7815 made some art of my charecter a few times, I figured,hey,why not return the favor L:

Criticism is heavily appreciated L:

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Noice M8

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That's what I'm talking about

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Fingers are too stubby

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The colouring's a tad messy, and there's a lack of shading. The proportions could use some work, and maybe some foreshortening on the left arm.

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he torso is too long in my opinion, and work on the fingers. looks good though.

better than what i can draw.

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3 hours ago, alfadog said:

Noice M8

 

3 hours ago, Awesome Emerald said:

Good job!

 

3 hours ago, ThatSuperSaiyanStar said:

That's what I'm talking about

Well thankyall

2 hours ago, Alinous Productions said:

Fingers are too stubby

Im still learning on how to draw hands,you notice the subject was going to be drawn as if he had 6 fingers, But I do need to practice yes.

tks for the comment

2 hours ago, -StickyMations- said:

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@BBruce7815 hey take a look

Haha! ,But its not col-God that Fist looks good!

2 hours ago, Achroma MC said:

The colouring's a tad messy, and there's a lack of shading. The proportions could use some work, and maybe some foreshortening on the left arm.

 

1 hour ago, Keep on Chucking said:

Little tip, when colouring, only pull your pencils into one direction, it'll make the colouring look much better.

 

1 hour ago, Pigeon_ said:

he torso is too long in my opinion, and work on the fingers. looks good though.

better than what i can draw.

I did have to deal with colored pencils, so i did try to remove as much white on the image because I fear it might look bad,(I did do shading before I started coloring) but perhaps some white could emphasize on shading.

 Proportion wise, you can argue using round head cartoon characters is sorta my art style, But I will admit the direction of the feet and front body do look slightly strange(probably not too off),not sure about leg to torso length, May need to increase the leg length, who knows :/

 but I will admit fingers do need a lot of  work also(As im still a noob on hands as mentioned), I did think about foreshortening and used an actual image I took for posing, But It may perhaps may be too small or lack of shading, without it, foreshortening is kinda pointless. :L

Thankyou K.O.C, I never thought a pro like you would take your time to help me, thankyou L:

Pigeon, I did feel surprised to hear, But I think you're better at drawing other things besides cartoon, round headed-like people than me,Like.

Pigeons?

But thankyall for taking your time to criticize my work so I can learn and improve. 

 

 

Edited September 16, 2016 by Ninjabee_Redtricity

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