Dragon Born Episode 1

[DizzyProductions 534]

 

[Proud_AnimatorZ 508]

sfx couldve been nice.

[OpHsVinicius 1.6k]

ohhhhh, the music and this animation it's just like: 

[Immqrtal 204]

dont understand how its an episode more of a cinematic or a music video

how ever it was smooth but camera movements could have been smoother , and lighting could have been better, as well as not to mention the little DOF errors

overall 4.5/10

[Czai Knight 434]

I'd give it a 7/10

Reasons are the same reasons Immqrtal stated above.

[NotChris 2.8k]

This has nothing to do with the Dovakiin! I am very disappointed.

Also the camera movements aren't very good.

[The Last Dreadnought 298]

Its good  

It remind me of Heaven Benchmark or the GPU tests where the camera just moves around a map

[Mike 3.4k]

some of the camera movements are really fluid and interesting, and then it switches to an ease out and back in? it's weird.

[Keep on Chucking 6.9k]

This is not really an episode, more of a teaser, first off, nobody makes a series with 45 second episodes, I'd go for at least 5 minutes minimum, there's no story to this either, it's more just a cinematic.

[DizzyProductions 534]

17 hours ago, Immqrtal said:

dont understand how its an episode more of a cinematic or a music video

how ever it was smooth but camera movements could have been smoother , and lighting could have been better, as well as not to mention the little DOF errors

overall 4.5/10

1 hour ago, Keep on Chucking said:

This is not really an episode, more of a teaser, first off, nobody makes a series with 45 second episodes, I'd go for at least 5 minutes minimum, there's no story to this either, it's more just a cinematic.

You can't say it's not a series when I haven't had time to make the second episode. There will be story but this is more of a get-to-know the area video.

 

18 hours ago, ViniciusbrMaster said:

ohhhhh, the music and this animation it's just like: 

lol

[Kapslock 692]

And omf the clickbait.

[Enchantek 442]

6 hours ago, DizzyProductions said:

There will be story but this is more of a get-to-know the area video.

...Then it isn't an episode.

[DizzyProductions 534]

20 hours ago, Iron431 said:

And omf the clickbait.

How is it clickbait? It's the name of a town that the map you see is.

23 hours ago, Keep on Chucking said:

>implying 45 seconds of camera panning should be called an episode

I've seen ads longer than that.

You may have, what has that got to do with this? I have seen many ads longer than lots of animated episodes, dosnt mean its not an episode.

[Kapslock 692]

4 hours ago, DizzyProductions said:

How is it clickbait? It's the name of a town that the map you see is.

 

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I would much rather see this ^^ quality than this vv

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It's making me expect good then see 45 seconds of jerky camera movements.

[DizzyProductions 534]

18 hours ago, Iron431 said:

 

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I would much rather see this ^^ quality than this vv

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It's making me expect good then see 45 seconds of jerky camera movements.

It's a thumbnail. You're meant to be appealed by how it looks. The thumbnail didn't bait you into anything. You're thoughts did.

[TheCryingSquid 325]

On 14/3/2017 at 5:29 PM, DizzyProductions said:

You can't say it's not a series when I haven't had time to make the second episode. There will be story but this is more of a get-to-know the area video.

 

lol

You shouldn't have made the first "episode" when you could have put so much more time into it. I'd suggest not making a series without establishing a story, with at least many episodes to cover. If you want people to watch a series, give them a reason to. Camera angles are not the way to go about it, and no this is not a proper episode. Pretty much everyone who has come to this topic has said so. You want to have a reason for someone to keep watching a series. With no context in it they won't have any.

[DizzyProductions 534]

1 minute ago, TheCryingSquid said:

You shouldn't have made the first "episode" when you could have put so much more time into it. I'd suggest not making a series without establishing a story, with at least many episodes to cover. If you want people to watch a series, give them a reason to. Camera angles are not the way to go about it, and no this is not a proper episode. Pretty much everyone who has come to this topic has said so. You want to have a reason for someone to keep watching a series. With no context in it they won't have any.

"pretty much everyone who has come to this topic has said so." Then why post this when I have responded to them? Just making me have to type more.

I have a story. Don't say I don't when you have no proof. This is the FIRST one of it. Story is being added.

[TheCryingSquid 325]

7 minutes ago, DizzyProductions said:

"pretty much everyone who has come to this topic has said so." Then why post this when I have responded to them? Just making me have to type more.

I have a story. Don't say I don't when you have no proof. This is the FIRST one of it. Story is being added.

Because you obviously haven't realised yet, that this is just a teaser, not an episode. Just because and episode is the first, doesn't mean you can show it without a story. If there is no story yet and it's just camera angles, why would anyone want to continue watching this? Yes I'm completely aware of the fact that you have a story ready, but to someone to isn't aware of that, what's the point?

Edited March 16, 2017 by TheCryingSquid

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

you need story if you want this to be a episode or a series