Czai Knight

I can perfectly view the text, background, and posing, so I have no idea what you are seeing.

One thing I might say though is that everything is good but the lighting needs a bit of a tweak and the background is to simple compared to the rig.

Overall, it is good art.

I may up-rep because of the animation...

(Try not to ask for rep even if down rep)

TBH, that looks like vanilla minecraft with shaders (It's a good thing)

Well done! Love that lighting ray, the glowing of the..."glow"stones is good, and the shadows.

Wow, I'm hyped a bit. Can't wait!

Although, it lacks sound. Add background/ambient sounds or music? I guess you probably have already fixed it because it's still in the making anyways. Just wanted to give a hint of feedback 

Wow! To be honest, I didn't expect much because of the thumbnail but man, I was proven wrong. 

Here's a tip or two.

The lava should be glowing or such, put the lava's brightness to 100. If you can't cause its part of the scenery, Remove the lava from the scenery, then add the lava manually in the animation program so you have full control over the lava.

The lighting needs work.

If u ever attempt a full scaled animation, don't use flatlands. I understand you still used fog to cover most of the flatlands but not all of it. Add trees next time or etc.

I know this was a test but I just wanted to lend some feedback. Hoped this helped 

Wow! So simple (of course, not the editing) but yet so amazing! +1

 

I must say "A-mei-zing"

That pun would have worked if it was related to an actual topic with that pun.

Ontopic: Love the lighting, pose of the character, ray lights, and scenery! 10/10!

Everything is perfect but the flipping in air sequence was to low to the ground.

Everything is too....purple....are we hallucinating? 

God, I love that detail with the bridge!

I knew the outcome because of that warning. 

Nevertheless, it's a very.....astonishing rig to view.

Some wind on the grass would be very nice as everything looks stiff. (My opinion)

Overall, I love the textured golem, lighting, and arrows stuck to the golem.

The background is good, the posing is pretty decent, the scenery is a good choice, but the lighting needs work.

Overall, it is very good.

Lighting could use some work.

Overall, I can't wait for it.

You could give a trembling feeling with less blurr. Of course, you said that the blur adds a trembling feeling but maybe try something else that does like flying corpses or people running away, or flying debris, or fire, or explosions.

Also you need to work on your lighting.

Overall, it's good. 

 

I think the wiggles add to the realistic factor, as if he was slightly losing his balance when he landed

I agree with that. 

Ontopic: Following SquareToDare's statement, if you were going for that losing balance landing, I suggest making the character lose some balance than re-gain some by moving the legs and position of the character more.

Overall, it is getting better, hoped this helped.

Not bad but the posing is not great, the effects are okay, and the scenery is a good choice.
Also lighting needs to be improved as well in this.

Hoped this helped 

I was waiting for someone to do a Wynncraft wallpaper.

Well done btw! However, the skin doesn't really fit in with the detailed scenery, effects, and background.

I think the skin should be rigged with some sorts of a helmet or cape or weapon/potion belt. (Just my opinion)

Okay, lets settle things first. The intro is never needed for an animation that is below a minute. The intro is also taking 25% of the video which is not a good thing.

Lighting was very poor in this so I suggest taking a look at some tutorials that the Mine-imator community gives.

It doesn't appear to be any type of scenery and just a white box, I suggest changing that next time unless there's a reason a person or thing is in a white box. 

During animation, try to make sense of it. Think about how would the thing or person would do it in real life than try to put it in the program.

Also, I suggest making out a plot, this looks more like a test.

Another thing is that there was no sounds. For complete, full scaled animation should atleast add sound effects or audio.

Hoped this helped 

I'd say 5.5/10

It is over edited and the posing is not that great. The same thing is with the lighting. There is no ambient of light, light sources, no sun, and seems overall a bland or lack of light.

However, the scenery is good and the particles are decent. The background is also great.

Also, in the middle of the wallpaper, it seems like there is a gap of nothing. Try to fit everything of interest in a wallpaper so it does not have a dull spot.

Hoped this helped 

That's actually pretty nice.

This is pretty neat! The animation is on a well done level, the lighting is on point, and the sound effects are good choices!

Looks more like the moon.

Add fire on it's surface or add a hurling effect or something.

Overall though, the posing is good and the lighting is decent. I rate this 8/10. 

Just a tip, probably not a good idea to host a collab when your reputation doesn't exceed 50 or 100.

Also, this collab idea doesn't seem that...great and unique. Yes, I don't think it has been done before but there's not really much interest in making a default animation. (This is just my opinion)

More time on this animation would have made it better tbh.

1) Make sure you cover up those flatlands next time.

2) Lighting needs work and next time, I suggest fixing the torches by placing very dim lights on them or removing them.

3) Animation needs work

4) Camera positioning and field of view changing needs work.

5) The realistic rig doesn't fit well in with all the other characters and scenery. Such as Herobrine and Notch.

6) A bit of a confusing plot

Overall, you should have invested more or a little more time into this animation but currently, it is okay.