Creeps

[CraftinPark 189]

Hello, its been a while mineimator. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gW9Z3QvcQLA

[CaptainClipy 1.4k]

Hey, that's pretty good!

[CatOnCaffeine 646]

boop.

 

[Lapis Productions 382]

4 minutes ago, CatOnCaffeine said:

boop.

Doop di dup.

Ontopic:It is a pretty nice BOOM!

[Skjold 7.6k]

That's really nicely done.

[Bugleberry 1.6k]

This looks amazing.

[CaptainKlutz 203]

Good points:

- Depth of field focussing in on creeper at start

- White overlay is not linear, lots of fluctuation, adds a lot

- Movement of the creeper is very good, reflects charging well

- Explosion is very nice, movement of creeper parts separate and varied (so good I played it frame by frame)

Criticisms:

- No 'bounce' on camera jerking upwards, also a little fast for my personal preference

 

Very nice animation overall! Really impressed

[Rollo 3.2k]

To be completely honest, I don't understand why everyone's praising this.

The DOF is nice at the beginning, but when it gets wider there is a very clear line between foreground and background, which doesn't look appealing.

Also the animation isn't even that good. You just rotated the creeper every frame.

And even though the flashes of the creeper were simple, they did look nice.

But it would look better if there was a clearer transition when he explodes. Like, there are flashes but not much else of a build up, and the flashes themselves just seem incomplete to me.

Oh yeah and the camera would look nicer with better transitions.

 

I'm not hating or anything, just giving constructive criticism on things I noticed.

Edited January 15, 2017 by Colonel Muffin