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The thing is the author could just leave me out for various other reasons. Also they did not get much votes, so they'll not get their unique wallpaper anyway.

Because only the people with highest reputation can deserve that.

Double negative for me. Because the quality of my creations is constantly decreasing.

Even if I get into the list one day, I won't get any votes, I must admit that.

No. I just can't show it properly.

I don't know how to improve the posing, facial expression and camera. That's the best I could do. ? And I don't add blood into my creations. Never ever.

Really I had no other title for that. Also it's just my old character being killed by my new character. Never done a fight wallpaper, but since there's no-death policy I plan to introduce, I promise there will be no more corpses in my wallpapers in this year. criticism_appreciated = true

You have the download button below the wallpaper - it's just the text itself that is hard to read.

- The ambient is too dark in my opinion. Make it more blueish and brighter. - The torch doesn't emit particles. -> Add them - The torch light is too dark too. -> Make it brighter - You could work at the background. I see there's a close edge of the scenery. -> Import more scenery or add a fog - The legs are not posed at all if I see correctly. -> Pose them - There's no depth of view. That could help too. The wallpaper is pretty simple and thus, unfortunately, generic. Try making something that no one made yet

The thing is: - if the stone wouldn't be edited out it'd be glowing too. - there's no any spider in the animation.

That's correct that collabs can boost your reputation, but if people doesn't like your work or did not get to know you well yet there's a high chance that people won't join your collab. Try to make some wallpapers and animations first, people won't animate for you "for free", you need to have some reputation

I'll write down some things you could improve/change: Lava should actually give some light, aka illuminate the walls of the canyon. I see you used a default ambient color. Make it darker. For the glowing diamond ore, try to edit out the stone from the diamond ore texture so only ore remains. Make a surface and put the ore texture so it will line up with the ore in the scenery. Add glow and brightness effects, delete the point light. It'd look 5x better. (I can make the diamond ore texture without stone for you if you want). The diamond ore block is slightly sticking out from the wall. Visible on 0:40. In the inventory, you could add a tooltip that the block he's holding is a gravel. Many blocks are similar. The character is holding the torch, but it is absent in the inventory. And the torch doesn't emit particles. To not make the ending bland, I've expected one of these endings, you could use one of them: - The pickaxe explodes and the impact knocks the character in the void. - (Optionally: the pickaxe instead of exploding just breaks, make two textures of the pickaxe halves), the character pose stays same, but after a while the character looks at the camera and shrugs. Overall, it's pretty nice for a first animation, I did not manage to make something similar for 2 years...

I don't think you have enough reputation to get many people join this collab. Also 2 weeks is way too little time to animate something like that in my opinion. The collab idea is pretty unique, I must admit that.

The vehicles and the chunk of the mud should be less linear. Perhaps making several folders and animating each axis in a separate folder would make it smoother. The water in the night looks green, that made me think it was grass. The pose of the driver looks kinda stiff, maybe make the body tilt back along with the arm to actually see the energy put into pulling the throttle down. The locomotives should emit a vast amount of smoke when throttling up. The explosion particles when the train derails are kinda out of place, you could either get rid of them or make them more visible. A nice idea would be to put a rescue train that would pull up the wagons back on the rails in some shots. You could also make a caption that would perhaps tell us that the driver died and maybe some other informations about the derail. Overall, it's a good animation!

Is it just me or the skeleton seems semi-transparent?

Still I've been a member of 9redwoods server for some time. It's okay I did not manage to get into the wallpaper, and congratulations for getting a heart badge on your topic!

I'm a 9redwoods friend and did not get into the wallpaper presumably because I don't have enough reputation. So yeah @MineWallpaper you need to gain a lot of reputation too.

We need to pick another person to make a wallpaper for his next birthday.

Oh, I'd recommend to reduce the body bending and increase the angle between the arms and the body then.

I'd rotate the arm on the side opposite of which the leg is in front forwards, because now the pose is quite stiff. If you'd do that, I think way more people will understand that the character is running Also I don't know what the thing on the right side of the wallpaper floating over the floor is. Either remove it or make it more distinguishable.

I have no criticism, this wallpaper is perfect in its entirety. Good job, you really deserve more reputation than me!

Okay, so I think you should rotate the torso. Make it look like it's amortizing the bobbing, too.

It looks good so far, but rendering in higher framerate and without the camera movement will help to judge the cycle itself more precisely.

Skin choice also matters and can change the overall look of the wallpaper. Also if you want to reply, quote the post instead of mentioning