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Wow, I was not disappointed in following the newest member. This is very good for a new member. But here are some tips:

  1. A little too much edge glow on the overhang above the character. Decrease it a little; you want to have one solid light source in this wallpaper (the moon).
  2. The character is glowing a lot too. Just less brightness there.
  3. I wouldn't recommend using fog that dense. It blots out the scenery.
  4. Posing could be adjusted a little. Make sure all your poses are life-like.

Things I love about this:

  1. The moon style fits the scene well.
  2. You are skilled at lighting, it seems.
  3. Your model is well made.
  4. Camera positioning is pretty good.
  5. Good scenery.

One thing that would make it look better would be adding a night skybox. But overall, not bad for your first post!

Edited by Frost*
this was my CC for the picture until it got removed ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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On 9/12/2019 at 11:27 PM, Frost* said:

Wow, I was not disappointed in following the newest member. This is very good for a new member. But here are some tips:

  1. A little too much edge glow on the overhang above the character. Decrease it a little; you want to have one solid light source in this wallpaper (the moon).
  2. The character is glowing a lot too. Just less brightness there.
  3. I wouldn't recommend using fog that dense. It blots out the scenery.
  4. Posing could be adjusted a little. Make sure all your poses are life-like.

Things I love about this:

  1. The moon style fits the scene well.
  2. You are skilled at lighting, it seems.
  3. Your model is well made.
  4. Camera positioning is pretty good.
  5. Good scenery.

One thing that would make it look better would be adding a night skybox. But overall, not bad for your first post!

Thanks bro UwU

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4 minutes ago, TrungDN_Artz said:

What? I still can see it 

 

None of us can. This is what it looks like to us:

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Edited by Frost*
ignore the enlarge image thing

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