[MGB] I M M O R T A L I TY : Episode 1 Immqrtal V.S CyberKinq

[The Tan James 3.9k]

Okay I really don't want to offend people here but I gotta get my point across. 

Putting aside these factors for a second:
- Minecraft
- "Reality Inspired"
- OC's

Basically anything that doesn't have to do with the actual artistic value of the animation. I think there's a number of things you could do to make it better. For starters, USE FOV  I cannot stress this enough when people do cinematography. Zoom is there for a reason, to make things look sexier. Also don't have the camera stay still for every single shot. have it wiggle a bit and explore the fact that what you're animating in is in fact a 3D environment. This isn't film making where you're restricted to how far you can reach or how stable you can hold the camera. Now for cinematic value, use the player rigs to your advantage. they have a face so do your best to portray everything through their face. Convey words without using words. Finally establish the setting and story before jumping straight into the fight. Answer questions like "What is happening now?" before continuing with the story. 

NOW. 

I just want to go and say that I can't really control these Reality inspired series. It's honestly up to the animator on what they want to do. The more I see them the more  I realize that I'm responsible for dropping this Nearly-as-bad-as-monster-school series on everyone. Please for the love of god find a different way to convey a story. I don't even want to finish R E A L I T Y at this point (I'm kinda obligated to because I promised my viewers AND Pepper that I would.) Reality was never supposed to be trying to showcase a cool edgy character. It was my way of venting my feelings of a difficult time to the world in a poetic way. You can't pull it off unless you know what it feels like to lose people the way I did (And don't go all "all this horrible stuff happened to me" because I know what it's like to lose friends in many different ways. I've lost so many people that I could go on but here I am not making edgy animations anymore) Soon enough I'm going to be off these forums, out of animation, off of YouTube and into the real world. I'm going to be coming up with MY OWN stories the same way ALL of you should. Nobody wants to watch a movie that's already been made, that's why most people hate remakes of other movies. Why most people say that the books were better. All of this is telling people to "STOP REMAKING" things. I hate seeing people being brought down for animations. But it's kind of your fault if you remake something.

Now I can't control your choice, but coming from the words of someone who actually wants to make a career out of writing, directing and producing, you should probably take my advice.

Edited March 12, 2017 by The Tan James

[Immqrtal 204]

22 minutes ago, The Tan James said:

Okay I really don't want to offend people here but I gotta get my point across. 

Putting aside these factors for a second:
- Minecraft
- "Reality Inspired"
- OC's

Basically anything that doesn't have to do with the actual artistic value of the animation. I think there's a number of things you could do to make it better. For starters, USE FOV  I cannot stress this enough when people do cinematography. Zoom is there for a reason, to make things look sexier. Also don't have the camera stay still for every single shot. have it wiggle a bit and explore the fact that what you're animating in is in fact a 3D environment. This isn't film making where you're restricted to how far you can reach or how stable you can hold the camera. Now for cinematic value, use the player rigs to your advantage. they have a face so do your best to portray everything through their face. Convey words without using words. Finally establish the setting and story before jumping straight into the fight. Answer questions like "What is happening now?" before continuing with the story. 

NOW. 

I just want to go and say that I can't really control these Reality inspired series. It's honestly up to the animator on what they want to do. The more I see them the more  I realize that I'm responsible for dropping this Nearly-as-bad-as-monster-school series on everyone. Please for the love of god find a different way to convey a story. I don't even want to finish R E A L I T Y at this point (I'm kinda obligated to because I promised my viewers AND Pepper that I would.) Reality was never supposed to be trying to showcase a cool edgy character. It was my way of venting my feelings of a difficult time to the world in a poetic way. You can't pull it off unless you know what it feels like to lose people the way I did (And don't go all "all this horrible stuff happened to me" because I know what it's like to lose friends in many different ways. I've lost so many people that I could go on but here I am not making edgy animations anymore) Soon enough I'm going to be off these forums, out of animation, off of YouTube and into the real world. I'm going to be coming up with MY OWN stories the same way ALL of you should. Nobody wants to watch a movie that's already been made, that's why most people hate remakes of other movies. Why most people say that the books were better. All of this is telling people to "STOP REMAKING" things. I hate seeing people being brought down for animations. But it's kind of your fault if you remake something.

Now I can't control your choice, but coming from the words of someone who actually wants to make a career out of writing, directing and producing, you should probably take my advice.

alright , im sorry ig, i wont "remake" anything related to you again.

it just that ur animations inspired me and i just want to become as good as an animator as you but i guess thats no option for me.

thank you for your response , and im sorry for any trouble this caused you...

its just that i loved the way you animated and , well yea you get the point

 

have a good night.

 

sorry

[Immqrtal 204]

2 hours ago, BlackDiamond said:

When you run out comebacks and have to resort to "not giving a shit anymore."

@Astro Animations 

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@Lee Animations blackmailed me 2 do dis

 

What does this have anything to do with not caring I don't want to reply to 10 other people saying the same thing , and why is Astro involved 

[Immqrtal 204]

3 hours ago, BlackDiamond said:

Apparently dis astro guy had a long argument with my boi lee

ah.

[The Tan James 3.9k]

10 hours ago, OzFalcon said:

@The Tan James Wow. That is-... wow. I also hope to one day become a director  ( *cough* I kind of won a film contest that the whole school had to participate in... )  

thats not bad! the first film fest I entered was called the BC student Film festival. It was for everyone in the province. I didn't win but I got second place

[Jovan0896 666]

22 hours ago, The Tan James said:

Okay I really don't want to offend people here but I gotta get my point across. 

Putting aside these factors for a second:
- Minecraft
- "Reality Inspired"
- OC's

Basically anything that doesn't have to do with the actual artistic value of the animation. I think there's a number of things you could do to make it better. For starters, USE FOV  I cannot stress this enough when people do cinematography. Zoom is there for a reason, to make things look sexier. Also don't have the camera stay still for every single shot. have it wiggle a bit and explore the fact that what you're animating in is in fact a 3D environment. This isn't film making where you're restricted to how far you can reach or how stable you can hold the camera. Now for cinematic value, use the player rigs to your advantage. they have a face so do your best to portray everything through their face. Convey words without using words. Finally establish the setting and story before jumping straight into the fight. Answer questions like "What is happening now?" before continuing with the story. 

NOW. 

I just want to go and say that I can't really control these Reality inspired series. It's honestly up to the animator on what they want to do. The more I see them the more  I realize that I'm responsible for dropping this Nearly-as-bad-as-monster-school series on everyone. Please for the love of god find a different way to convey a story. I don't even want to finish R E A L I T Y at this point (I'm kinda obligated to because I promised my viewers AND Pepper that I would.) Reality was never supposed to be trying to showcase a cool edgy character. It was my way of venting my feelings of a difficult time to the world in a poetic way. You can't pull it off unless you know what it feels like to lose people the way I did (And don't go all "all this horrible stuff happened to me" because I know what it's like to lose friends in many different ways. I've lost so many people that I could go on but here I am not making edgy animations anymore) Soon enough I'm going to be off these forums, out of animation, off of YouTube and into the real world. I'm going to be coming up with MY OWN stories the same way ALL of you should. Nobody wants to watch a movie that's already been made, that's why most people hate remakes of other movies. Why most people say that the books were better. All of this is telling people to "STOP REMAKING" things. I hate seeing people being brought down for animations. But it's kind of your fault if you remake something.

Now I can't control your choice, but coming from the words of someone who actually wants to make a career out of writing, directing and producing, you should probably take my advice.

Preach brotha!

[Ninja Dino 1.2k]

22 hours ago, BlackDiamond said:

Apparently dis astro guy had a long argument with my boi lee

Omg I remember that

[TheButterMinecart 2]

I like the character rigs in my MGB its mostly just skin with SKIBBZ facial rig

[Patrick 1.7k]

On 12.3.2017 at 6:01 AM, Immqrtal said:

alright , im sorry ig, i wont "remake" anything related to you again.

it just that ur animations inspired me and i just want to become as good as an animator as you but i guess thats no option for me.

thank you for your response , and im sorry for any trouble this caused you...

its just that i loved the way you animated and , well yea you get the point

 

have a good night.

 

sorry

Ok, hold up. You don't have to animate the same concept/idea as someone else to become as good as them. I know how it is, i've been there myself. Practise makes perfect. And the most important thing is, be open for critisism. Learn from them. Everyone makes mistakes but you learn from it.  

Find up some good ideas, find a target audience. Ask them what they want.

And last, but not least... Have fun making the animation 

[The Last Dreadnought 298]

Its just something I dont understand about this animation style is like the combat really isnt combat. Its just teleporting from frame to frame. Letting your brain do the work to imagine what happened.