I animated for once, it's a walking one

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

The rig is by me.

Edited December 18, 2016 by EthanForeverAlone

[KicksBrickster 4.3k]

That just looks wrong for some reason...

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

9 minutes ago, KicksBrickster said:

That just looks wrong for some reason...

What looks wrong?

[KicksBrickster 4.3k]

1 minute ago, EthanForeverAlone said:

What looks wrong?

The rig. Everything about it is just wrong.

[Colchy 420]

the face

[BaconGhast 239]

I LIKE IT!

[willingsas 1.9k]

Something about the face seems odd. Who knows. Apart from that, that's a good animation right there.

[Spontaneous Explosions 1.2k]

I can't really tell if it is a good walk cycle or not, because he doesn't move.Also, i agree with everyone else. The rig looks...wrong.

Edited December 18, 2016 by Spontaneous Explosions

[Proud_AnimatorZ 508]

Im Sorry let me explain what my fellow friends of these forums are trying to say is 

1. Face seems a bit messy

2. body look wide an kinda stretched 

3. the collar bone for your rig looks really odd as u can a black line on the neck 

4. finally the arms look to skinny

Edited December 18, 2016 by Proud_AnimatorZ

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

1 minute ago, Proud_AnimatorZ said:

Im Sorry let me explain what my fellow friends of these forums are trying to say is 

1.

What?

[Proud_AnimatorZ 508]

1 minute ago, EthanForeverAlone said:

What?

read it again i finished it

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

3 minutes ago, Proud_AnimatorZ said:

Im Sorry let me explain what my fellow friends of these forums are trying to say is 

1. Face seems a bit messy

2. body look wide an kinda stretched 

3. the collar bone for your rig looks really odd as u can a black line on the neck 

4. finally the arms look to skinny

You*

1. I dont see how it's messy.

2. It's a bit stretched but I dont see how it's very noticeable.

3. That's the shadow.

4. Default Alex arms.

[Varen 3.3k]

1 hour ago, EthanForeverAlone said:

You*

1. I dont see how it's messy.

2. It's a bit stretched but I dont see how it's very noticeable.

3. That's the shadow.

4. Default Alex arms.

Half of these are just stating what they are, he's saying these points make the rig look bad.

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

3 minutes ago, Varen said:

Half of these are just stating what they are, he's saying these points make the rig look bad.

I know.

[Colchy 420]

the face looks like its a lot of faces placed together or something. 

[[GMK]animations 17]

UGLY

[CaptainClipy 1.4k]

On ‎12‎/‎18‎/‎2016 at 6:18 PM, [GMK]animations said:

UGLY

RUDE

[R3dP0tat024 24]

How does the criticizer feel being criticized? They were right. The face looks kinda odd.

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

7 hours ago, R3dP0tat024 said:

How does the criticizer feel being criticized? They were right. The face looks kinda odd.

Pretty good, although I was looking for criticism on the animation, not the rig. 

[BBruce7815 2k]

8 hours ago, R3dP0tat024 said:

How does the criticizer feel being criticized? They were right. The face looks kinda odd.

butthurt brat detected!

[Sonicxryan 1.3k]

The animation looks good! Now... insert totally original comment about the rig here.

[Frost 3.3k]

I'm not gonna lie; the animation looks better than most. The rig is fine; I don't see any problem except the arms come down and are not attached to the shoulders. And the head is a little big, but it's fine.

[Enchantek 442]

15 hours ago, R3dP0tat024 said:

How does the criticizer feel being criticized? They were right. The face looks kinda odd.

He uses constructive criticism when he judges posts, pointing out the problems etc.

Regarding the animation/gif, it's great!

The physics on the green parts of the jacket partially disturbs me though...

[iiBerry_ 67]

Pretty good, the face looks kinda weird but I like the animation.