Lost Island Episode 2

[Chickenk122 105]

So its longer then 1 minute(sort of). I hope you enjoy the second episode!

Hope you enjoyed it! (IK IT STILL SUCKS)

[Anatoli 769]

[DTN Animations 148]

It was okay....... but really, there should be a little more depth into what was happening, oh and YOU NEED SOUND EFFECTS, and maybe some music to go along w/ it.

Edited July 20, 2016 by IsaacCho

[Heavenira 3.7k]

[Chickenk122 105]

3 minutes ago, Heavenira said:

when he crys.....

[Patrick 1.7k]

First of all.

Add some music.

For example when he dropped a tear. That moment could be more sad if you added a sad song or anything calm.

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Also think about the story before making a series.

The story looks extremly rushed.

The only thing i can tell is that they are going to hawaii becouse no school(i guess) , and the plane motor goes "nope" and they fall down.

For some random reason only the 3 brothers survives without getting hurt or anything.

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You could also work on the movements.

The animation looked extremly rushed.

Some of the movements didnt really make sense.

Experiment a little bit and your good to go. 

 

 

Edited July 20, 2016 by Patrick

[Anatoli 769]

2 minutes ago, Patrick said:

I suggest watching some tutorials and make some tests before making an animation.

 

[Patrick 1.7k]

Just now, BlueYoshi73 said:

 

i just realised how i messed up that sentence.

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

5 minutes ago, Patrick said:

I suggest watching some tutorials and make some tests before making an animation.

Tutorials can be useful, but tests isn't really that necessary.

[Patrick 1.7k]

1 minute ago, Simon G. Andersen said:

Tutorials can be useful, but tests isn't really that necessary.

Making Walking tests and smooth tests can be necessary. 

But i get your point.

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

3 minutes ago, Patrick said:

Making Walking tests and smooth tests can be necessary. 

But i get your point.

Me myself have only been releasing one single test in my entire time of using MI, and that wasn't even a movement test, it was just a quality test.

[zoocomicsx 647]

My bro... why did you steal a scene from minewars? word for word mate? why are you being a spicy boi all of a sudden?

1 hour ago, Heavenira said:

But MineWars was Horrible

[Chickenk122 105]

I worked on this actully for 2 weeks. It hasent been rushed. 

[ShadowGMC 553]

1. love how only the 3 brothers survive and no one else does.

2. the orange guy went through the door without opening it.

3. weird movements.

4. could have at least used a different editor other than windows movie maker.

5. literally added 2 cubes for eyebrows. seriously?

sorry i just had to

[MCBoomBox 188]

1 hour ago, zoocomicsx said:

My bro... why did you steal a scene from minewars? word for word mate? why are you being a spicy boi all of a sudden?

But MineWars was Horrible

what scene? i watched to the food part then stopped watching. 

[iFallOffStuff 52]

Personally I would have suggested making a few more animations before going into a series now but you've started now..

Next episode i'd suggest on taking your time more.. it looks kind of rushed to me. Two weeks isn't awfully long... it depends on how much you animate each day I guess.

Finally, make your movements much more natural... The brothers just seem to slide towards each other at times. 

Oh yeh, sound effects would help the animation too.

[zoocomicsx 647]

3 hours ago, MCBoomBox said:

what scene? i watched to the food part then stopped watching. 

"Your going to do great things when you grow up"

Edit: I'm not mad or anything just pointing that out 

Edited July 21, 2016 by zoocomicsx

[NietyFox 5.5k]

the posing on the thumbnail is 10/10

[CaptainClipy 1.4k]

I love how in one scene they have regular skins and then in the next they have face rigs.

[ShadowGMC 553]

1 hour ago, TheFastFilms said:

10/100 needs more explosions

dont bring michael bay here

[Patrick 1.7k]

7 hours ago, zoocomicsx said:

"Your going to do great things when you grow up"

Edit: I'm not mad or anything just pointing that out 

But he said: "He is going to do great things when he grows up".

And im pretty sure half of the worlds parents says that dang grammar

[zoocomicsx 647]

This reminds me back when this was my standard of a good animation, then MineWars happened

i know this is one of your first animations but you can improve a lot. You should add music and sound effects, plus the dialogue sounds like something no sane person would actually say out loud. Also don't steal scenes from MineWars m8, that will just devalue your series if you try to copy another one. Btw if your going to do a MineWars scene don't do it in flatlands, that hurt my soul. Id be flattered if you had the courtesy to add at least a generic house or something. You may have spent a week on it but that dosnt help your case here. when animating walk scenes don't make the characters slide and don't just bend the leg and call that walking. Watch some skibbz tuts on movement. Also since your a part of FSP you can get our help too

Edited July 21, 2016 by zoocomicsx

[zoocomicsx 647]

12 minutes ago, Patrick said:

I don't know if that was ment for me.

I didnt make this.

i think

Didn't mean to quote you mate

[Patrick 1.7k]

41 minutes ago, zoocomicsx said:

Didn't mean to quote you mate

Ok.

[The Animator 53]

Everything can be improved, but overall i like it.

Edited July 27, 2016 by The Animator