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Great animation.

Tips: A sound for the words at the beginning to add a foreboding effect, and a texture pack would have helped a lot too.

Didn't think about the sound that much :P

 

The texture pack was something i was going to add in but then i completely forgot.

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there were clichés in this

 

Eerie backround music.

 

long barren hallways

 

camera overlay( with no batteries. am I the only one who saw that?)

 

Everything is dark

 

predictable jumpscares.

 

ok and now for the actual animation

 

I cant tell if your trying to make this character seem to be walking or floating cuzz there's no indication even if there isn't suppose to be a character

 

Atleast the distortion effects wasn't overused like that Skype horror trailer thing

 

as a man who is not afraid of many things. that jumpscare at the end didn't surprise me

 

were there suppose to be any periscopes(don't take this seriously)

 

k im done, no rating here

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there were clichés in this

 

Eerie backround music.

 

long barren hallways

 

camera overlay( with no batteries. am I the only one who saw that?)

 

Everything is dark

 

predictable jumpscares.

 

ok and now for the actual animation

 

I cant tell if your trying to make this character seem to be walking or floating cuzz there's no indication even if there isn't suppose to be a character

 

Atleast the distortion effects wasn't overused like that Skype horror trailer thing

 

as a man who is not afraid of many things. that jumpscare at the end didn't surprise me

 

were there suppose to be any periscopes(don't take this seriously)

 

k im done, no rating here

Reason why the Hallways were there is because its based off an article i read about a place Exactly like this (Periscopes were involved)

http://www.wimp.com/creepiestthing/

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Reason why the Hallways were there is because its based off an article i read about a place Exactly like this (Periscopes were involved)

http://www.wimp.com/creepiestthing/

Well now that i've read it

ill give you another pointless criticism: you should've made the hallways more "worn" looking

 

don h8. appreci8.

 

since you showed me wyour source of insparation of this you get a 7,9/10

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Well now that i've read it

ill give you another pointless criticism: you should've made the hallways more "worn" looking

 

don h8. appreci8.

 

since you showed me wyour source of insparation of this you get a 7,9/10

Thanks for the feedback :D

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Well now that i've read it

ill give you another pointless criticism: you should've made the hallways more "worn" looking

 

don h8. appreci8.

 

since you showed me wyour source of insparation of this you get a 7,9/10

That roots back to him forgetting to use a texture pack.

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