IraelianEnergy

I'm in agreeance on the warm colors. A lot of orange, but with my skin making style (I make a lot, for myself and friends), the sleeves don't look too weird for me. I understood right away. 

14 hours ago, Shane said:

You could do what they did in the anime "Gangsta", where the main character is deaf and therefore talks in either jumbled spoken language or sign language. It's pretty interesting to see how the other characters interact with the main character with this language barrier, you can try doing a similiar thing if you're planning on making a series or any story-driven animation.

(the anime has some suggestive themes though so i might wanna slap a 13+ disclaimer here as to not get banned)

I'd never heard of the anime, but I may have to look into it. My character isn't completely deaf, but she does have something where she'll go deaf for a few hours or days of a noise is too loud for her, so interactions during that time will definitely be interesting.

2 minutes ago, Cubic Ralsei said:

what's the relation with wings and language?

The only relation is the rig used. I should have specified, but I updated my character model a bit! I know some friends that would have asked about them.

    So, y'all don't really know me too well, but I'm actually learning 3 languages at the moment. I love language, and I've spent the past few months trying to figure out how to incorporate this into my wallpapers and animations. Now, I've finally decided to go with it and start incorporating ASL into my Mine Imator projects.
   This is my first public test animation. I understand that the lighting is a bit bland, but as always, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
(Note: I cannot upload to Youtube, so a friend suggested streamable!)
https://streamable.com/ge4cob

And here are the wings I've added to my rig, heavily inspired by the Wings mod. Textures originally came from the mod, but I changed them for my character idea.

It doesn't show a lot, but it's still a nice render.

The gallop is very nice, but I feel like the canter could use a bit more fluid movement in the feet. Other than that, I have nothing else to say right now. Great job! 

'True... beauty in a prank.' 

Maybe make some gifs or short clips of them? I've spent hundreds of hours around horses and I'd love to look at them, but I can't take the time to download and import them right now.

Ah! Is this like from the wings mod? Well done, though.

2 hours ago, MicrogamerCz said:

COMIC SANS SUCKS!

Ik. Are you triggered?

2 hours ago, MicrogamerCz said:

Lighting should have a bit more work, becuase it looks like work of one point light

and only DoF? it should have 1 more camera effect (bloom for example). you know what, ignore this line. 

I was trying to keep it from becoming too light, but I will work more on that tomorrow, thank you. I was also afraid of adding bloom bc I have the text added in MI.

6 minutes ago, Swingzero said:

ummmm

idk what to say about this

SHould I take that as a good or a bad thing?

(Yes, I'm using Comic Sans and you can't stop me!)
Here's the wallpaper I've made for a banner. This is my first attempt at one though.

After CC:

As always, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

1 hour ago, tvanderb said:

Thanks. The red and blue light is supposed to be emitting from a 'SWAT Van'. Also, when I look at it now, it does seem a little to dark.

 

Here's a few images during day:

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Ty. 

That's pretty good! I'm confused about where the red light is coming from though, and I can't really see their poses that well because of the shadows and dark floor.

Very detailed!

5 hours ago, KrisFirebolt said:

Maybe its because they think they'll be more adoorable?

You don't need to shut it. ;D

1 hour ago, MojangYang said:

Dark oak doors are the best!

True tho!

43 minutes ago, Draco63 said:

It would be funnier if the door was a full-size door, not just the door item.

I was actually planning something similar, just not with that door. xP

49 minutes ago, Draco63 said:

I feel like the wallpaper isn't as comedic as it should be, but otherwise it's okay.

Thank you for pointing that out. It wasn't supposed to be completely comedic, and there is a dark side to all of that too, but I could definitely put a bit more work into the comedy side.

   A bit of story behind my character: She has an obsession with doors. It's become a bit of a problem.

As always, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I'll try to make a before and after of suggested changes later on.

After:

9 hours ago, MojangYang said:

Nice model, bland lighting.

I didn't have much time yesterday to do much with it, but thank you for the feedback!

   Life happened, and I backed off from Mine Imator and Blender for a while. Now, I've come back with IECMv1, a model of my own for my characters. It's private currently, because of that, but here's a quick render I made of the new look.

   As always, constructive criticism is asked for and greatly appreciated. Just keep in mind that this was a rushed render.

On 10/12/2019 at 8:09 PM, Frost* said:

Lighting looks pretty good, but the posing could be more relaxed. Rigs look pretty good, but there's no scenery out of the windows. Keep these things in mind. 

This was admittedly made in a hurry, but I do plan on making changes in the future and will keep your comment in mind. Thank you.

It's bad, but I had fun making it. The title kinda says it all though.

1 minute ago, Rawami said:

Maybe a bit too dark? Try to lower the SSAO or something like that.

The SSAO is only 100, not very high.