KingOfWizards

eyo so, this animation took around 3 months (mainly procrastination and loss of motivation), but it's finally done. My first time trying out fight scenes, so I hope you like it If you're a bit confused what's going on, don't worry if you don't understand, it's different minigames from mineplex being put all into one. If you're also confused why one players skin keeps changing, it's because its going through all of the subscribers skin Anyways, hope you enjoy it, and if you have any comments/suggestions/CC, let me know!

Ah, thanks!

Sorry, looking for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Literally the only sound problem was the Anvil, and that was because Mine-Imator glitched out and wouldn't play the audio, so I just gave up and assumed it wouldn't be in the final version of the animation I'm going to assume the rest of the animation was fine since you had no comments.

Hey everyone! This is an animation I've been working on for a while for a server I play on a lot with a game called Wizards I'm currently looking for constructive criticism. Anyways, I hope you all enjoy it!

Wow I did not expect it to be this amazing. But it looks like he can't bend, though.

When I read the title I thought this was Pokemon related This looks amazing. I love the little aura around Red. How did you get the lines coming out of Yellow's sword btw?

Rig download? This is amazing

Great animation, but the pillow hammer itself could use a lot of improvement. It looks cheap, as I can tell its simple a 2x2x20 Spruce Wood with a huge wool block on top.

Great! Good luck with all your future animations!

There may be a faster way though Maybe use this?

Awesome! I love the blur effect!

Ah the first collab I can ever join.... I'm excited to do this! Ermmmm... It loads dirt instead of stone for some reason...

No rank needed, just mess with a few settings and thats all

Thats a signature, so in his signature he put his GIF. Signatures are things that automatically show up at the bottom in every post you make. You and I currently do not have one right now, which is why nothing is showing up for both of us.

Even if the story is incredibly predictable, it wouldn't hurt to release it. You must feel terrible seeing all your hard work getting this hate, as I know how much work goes into animations. Learn from your mistakes, and in the future you can make better animations! Btw ur animation is beautiful, the story and the voice actors need a bit of improvising though.

I feel like you could've done more justice to the legs and the body, but pretty cool!

Beautiful

Beautiful... Streetfighter in Minecraft confirmed?

As said by Basseyh, yes, there needs to be more of an emphasis on the up and down movement

Amazing, two things though. Its pointless to have the other hand out when its barely touching the gun, so I think its better to leave the other hand down. Another thing is something that bugs me like crazy when people dont do this. Please, just please, add scenery. It could be a natural biome, anything but the plain grass.

This is beautiful.... How did you get your hotbar, health, and food by the way?

This is beautiful for a first time. Few things though. After running for a while and then panting, I usually don't pant with my arms out wide. I bend down and put my hands on my knees. Another thing is that sound is EVERYTHING! I understand it is your first animation so this shouldn't be expected of you, but sound really affects the animation. It can make an animation rated 3/10 to 6/10. I'm just trying to show importance to sound. This isn't expected of you from such an early animation. Another thing, you should keep particles coming up from torches. and possibly flickering light when the torch is attached to the wall. Another thing is that fight animations should be intense, and a great way to do that is to mix up a bunch of camera angles! So if you felt like redoing this animation in the future, put a bunch of more animations in the zombie fight scene! These are all just tips for the future! Great animation!

Hey, thanks for the response, but I'm looking more for comments on how to improve my animations!

Hey everyone! I'm a guy who likes to make Mine-Imator animations every once in a while, so when I reached 50 subscribers, I made this special animation for them. Lots of things go on during the animation, and I just wanted your guys input since I am a bit new to this.