3 minutes ago, Simon G. Andersen said:

Adding some scenery is really important, when attempting to create a decent looking banner. Also don't make the text in MI. Use https://cooltext.com/ to create a more interesting looking logo. As stated above, posing needs some sort of effort to it.

or https://textcraft.net/

well, first welcome ^^

anyway this wallpaper is not bad, maybe you could work a little on the posing

also

3 hours ago, FHDxD said:

Rip Me SO LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONGGG Quit MI

so notice me ;-;

not really useful m8

if you start on this forum to be noticed,

only the quality of your work would help you to be known

so try to make some serious title for your creations,

it'll help to don't get downvote

anyway, nice start ^^

you've got my

it's a beautiful wallpaper

5 hours ago, Nimi said:

tell me what I need to improve on.

well, maybe you could reduce a little the size of the rabbit,

and maybe try to make clothe physics with the lamas,

but for me it's already a good wallpaper

+1

beautiful but... flatlands

well

flatlands

x(

it's a beautiful wallpaper

but the background looks a little empty

try to add 1 or 2 spruce trees and it will be perfect

anyway, you've got one more like

a little dark, but very nice

+1

not bad, but try to rig the dressing and the hair too

also, is the sword in 3d ? for me, it looks like only a texture

try to make some relief on the sword

anyway, rep+1

too fast

reduce the speed

5 minutes ago, CreeperDudeAnimations said:

Sorry, map is not fully immersed myself.

np

it's why i told you to take more time to do your animations

if you make it too quickly, the result won't be very good

well

it's pretty good, but :

- you need to work a little on the movement

- flatlands x(

- don't try to make you animation too much fast, it will reduce his quality, and in this forum, we prefer quality and not quantity

  so for your animations, take all the time you want to make them

13 minutes ago, CreeperDudeAnimations said:

I tried to make the animation as fast as possible

anyway, +1

for lazy

well

movements don't looks realistic

try to make them more smooth and

try to inspire from real movement

anyway, rep+1

at 0:04 what happen with this witch

anyway it's pretty cool

+1

well

just one thing :

try to create your own universe, to make something original.

i say this because for me, this video looks like one of the episode of REALITY by The Tan James :

fight, dark side, music, and flatlands.

i'm sure you can be creative, and what i'd like to see on this forum would be something that really correspond to your creativity

anyway, rep+1, because i hope that you'll be able to share with us your creativity

well

work on the scenery and the movements

we can see flatlands, and the movements are not really realistic

also, when you use rigs, try to credit his creator if he asked to,

or only to be sympathetic

anyway, it's not too much bad, and i'm sure you can improve

rep+1

it looks beautiful

to improve it, you could maybe try to don't cut the top of their head

by changing the point of view

anyway lightning is perfect, scenery too,

you've got one more like

nice but....

15 minutes ago, ILatentKitsuneI said:

He means the Calendar and the phone

oh, ok thanks

3 hours ago, NietyFox said:

The only thing that peeves me is the shadows and the stretched texture.

i don't see any streched texture

you could work a little on movements

try to make them more realistic and detailed

not bad, but work a little on the posing of the arms

-> looks unatural

well, maybe you should work on the pose

anyway it's not bad

1 minute ago, pigmanmovie forum said:

i try taht sometime

but i publish a video

ok