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yet another wallpaper i don't like the outcome of

Hostage_rescue.png

have it anyways

Credit to @crustyjpeg for providing the guns. They were taken from his modelbench armory post and one was even made just for this render! Big thanks.

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aight i'll go through what is and isn't good

the good:
-great posing
-great lighting
-the props are nice (haha get it)
-dof used well
-and the effects (lens flare and stuff) seem pretty nice

the bad:
-could use more interesting scenery instead of this empty thing, i don't know what kind of place it is so i ain't sure what kind of props would be appropriate but i'm sure you can come up with something
-the sparkles on the eyes are really distracting and i'd advise you get rid of those
-and where is that light on them coming from?  if it's from like a helicopter or something i'd advise making it a bit clearer it's coming from above with some mild light rays or something, maybe also a rope they deployed from

the ugly:
-i'm sorry i just had to make this joke please don't hurt me

 


overall i like it but it could certainly be better

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1 minute ago, crustyjpeg said:

aight i'll go through what is and isn't good

the good:
-great posing
-great lighting
-the props are nice (haha get it)
-dof used well
-and the effects (lens flare and stuff) seem pretty nice

the bad:
-could use more interesting scenery instead of this empty thing, i don't know what kind of place it is so i ain't sure what kind of props would be appropriate but i'm sure you can come up with something
-the sparkles on the eyes are really distracting and i'd advise you get rid of those
-and where is that light on them coming from?  if it's from like a helicopter or something i'd advise making it a bit clearer it's coming from above with some mild light rays or something, maybe also a rope they deployed from

the ugly:
-i'm sorry i just had to make this joke please don't hurt me

 


overall i like it but it could certainly be better

yeah, the main reason this didn't turn out that well was because i worked on it for too long and just lost motivation, rushed it at the end basically. I was planning on changing most of the camera effects and it's placement but as i said, lost motivation

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