Benji

The sky isn't orange in the summer. ? Besides. The lighting is actually quite warm looking.

Depends on the time of the morning. It could be anywhere between 5 to 11. Again, the shadows indicate around 10. So, the sky wouldn't really be orange then. xP

Nah. Look at the shadows and stuff. Morning 100%.

High Dynamic Range. xP

The vignette is too strong for me and there aren't really any shadows, but it looks p gucci.

Can confirm this. I made the skin. xP

It's not even criticism, though. It's nitpicking. Redwoods does this with everything and it's a bit exasperating when he acts like a God about this kind of stuff. I care about the smallest of details, but maybe you should take a page from an actual critique's book and not just nitpick one tiny thing. I've been in the art scene for quite a while, I've witnessed people go from chicken scratchers to freaking Da Vinci in under a year, but it wasn't because of some kid pointing out that this pixel is smaller than that pixel, it was because they had people who understand the work and know how things work together write literal 3 page paragraphs pointing out the smallest flaws, but they told them how to fix it. It wasn't like "I do this, so you should too" though, it was "There are multiple ways to fix this, and I suggest maybe trying this or that and finding out what you like." Criticism isn't something everyone can do, and it isn't what you do. Criticism is an art of its own and it can be greater than the art itself. You need to let go of personal style when going in to write, and you need to actually try to help. On the topic of your signature, I agree with that. I would love it if Nolan or Spielberg read over my trainwreck of a script and told me what to fix but in your case. You are not the intelligent man. Yes, I criticized your critique. Have a good day. And keep this in mind.

I am calm. xP

It's nitpicking at most. But, if that's what you consider criticism, I can see why people get offended when people write actual criticism. You didn't even actually comment on the wallpaper as a whole, but just one of the smallest details. Like, what?

It's not even criticism. It's literally pointing out something that isn't really relevant.

The form requires your age. xP

Oof right. I should probably write that. It slipped my mind. ?

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Okay, so! Right off the bat, I noticed the skin doesn't really fit the scene or texture pack. The town is obviously fantasy-esque, but the skin looks more modern and the shading technique clashes with the style of the texture pack. While it's not too big of a deal, it's a pet peeve of mine. As for the scenery, it's passable, but the left top corner seems fairly empty. Some mountains could fix it. Another alternative is having a low FOV to mimic an orthographic lens, so the background covers up more. The lighting its self is pretty nonexistent as there aren't really any shadows and the colors seem pretty desaturated. That could be because the wallpaper is supposed to be cloudy though I guess. Lastly; the camera. To put it simply. It's boring. Honestly made me yawn. (I am sleep deprived though, so *shrug*) The vignette is a bit too strong. the angle is just plain boring and the entire camera just really lacks. I don't really know what to say on how to improve it, but I suggest experimenting with stuff a lot. Like bloom. It doesn't really have any of that. Other than that I'd rate it a 6.3/10. Keep at it and never give up and you will improve! -- You're friendly Forum Critic, Tug.

Or moderate quality. Basic, so-so. etc. The ligthing doesn't look like something for a sunset. Lighting form a sunset is usually a bright golden. Hence us photographers calling the time before sunset "Golden Hour" Just some future advice.

You can adjust the DoF range. : P Also, do you know what mediocre means?

Y'know. For a wallpaper based around the sunset, the lighting is pretty mediocre.

Throne?