NovaCeres

That first transition is a bit awkward with the music. The walk cycle is awkward also.

And also on this opening scene what purpose does it show to us about this character? Is she reckless and doesn't care about the world around her? Or is she depressed and thinks the world doesn't care too much for her because everything is frozen? (that music needs to change if you're conveying that) Also if she is reckless. You may need to make the lighting pop out a bit more and maybe have everyone move

@Ninjabee_Redtricity

The reason for the music is that she is listening to the music, (I fixed the headphones and a wire so it will be visible) and as for why everything is frozen, she often stops time deliberately, creating a conflict with another character later on in the animation. About the lighting, I like taking animation in steps. Get the basic movement and plot down, then keep building. Normally I save lighting for near last, but I am probably going to fix it now. As for why she stops time, she uses it as a way for her to say: "I'm boss here, don't mess with me." And the walk cycle looks a bit weird because she is dancing, and after basing it off me dancing while walking, I came up with that. I tried to give her a rather happy look in the beginning.