Posts posted by Czai Knight
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Really not bad for a first!
However, there are a few flaws.
1) Next time add a bit of fog as we can see the world borders.
2) When Steve was swining the case, Steve should atleast have a bit more motion to other parts of the body.
3) The backflip startup needs some work.
4) If your doing slow motion, during the scene of the Hammer falling down, Steve should have a bit more motion other than hovering in the air waiting to receive the almighty hammer.
5) Lighting needs work
and 6) Add more sound other than the hammer transforming.
Hoped this helped
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1 minute ago, Gamer_TamerYT said:
i can see it, it in the dark
I didn't realize THAT was the head of the elite. It needs to have more of a neck next time.
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1) Needs Scenery (OR anything other than flatlands)
2) Posing needs alot more work
3) Put more effort into these.
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Camera needs a better position.
Lighting needs some work
Overall, its great!
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Amazing! Reminds me of an enemy from skyrim (I did not play skyrim, i watched vidoes of it)
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Okay..time to take out the list of criticism.
1) Skeletons don't bleed in real life nor in game.
2) Atleast try to make an actual camp fire (unless that fire is a forest fire than you don't need one)
3) Posing needs work
4) Lighting needs work
5) Background looks empty
6) Scenery is ok
7) Camera position needs work
8) Fire (or campfire) set it's brightness to 100 percent.
9) Is that a torch on the top left tree?
10) Make sure to credit the creators if they want the credit (or if you created the rigs or you dont need to credit them but still suggest on being nice and credit)
Hoped this helped
- Cyprès, DARK_MC, BBruce7815 and 1 other
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Reminds me of the combine from Half Life
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You're making me hungry...
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LOVE the grass and tree designs/textures. However, their should be a bit or fog or something because this just likes like a clump of trees in one small area instead of it looks like a forest. Maybe add more trees to the back to make it looks more deep? It is lacking something that does not scream forest that I can not describe. This is my opinion anyway. Still love it
- KindZax and Astro Animations
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You are seriously a wizard!
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I assume u have not enabled status updates.
Go to your profile
Click edit profile
Click enable status updates.
Then when u want to create a status
-click the button "create" then click status.
Hoped this help
- Progio, Frost and -StickyMations-
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Honestly, this looks pretty good!
The part that kind of looks weird and a bit chunk"ish" is the stock. Work on that and it should look better!Just remember next time, don't use as much stretched blocks
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Surfboard could definitely use more detail.
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Well done although...
The interior could have some lights though.
The missiles could use some more detail same with the turrets a bit.
Could have a bit more of variety with color but since this is a black battleship, I don't think it really matters but the detail does.
Aside from all this, this was good!
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Nice!....nice....
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Amazing rig man!
I would have to agree with the black colors though, but it is not everyday we get cool rigs so still awesome.
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7 minutes ago, DragonLord said:
Where has your YouTube Channel gone?
You are right. Probably a copyright issue?
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18 minutes ago, MachineGunInc said:
Wait what?
He was being sarcastic i think?
- NietyFox and MachineGunInc
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Ummmm criticism ummmm...U need to fix....ehhhh...nothing that I can see cause it is amazing man!
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My first animation: A briefcase transforming into a hammer
in Random/Test animations
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3) I guess the backflip startup is okay, I just can't really describe how to improve it better but when you improve in animation in general, it should alright.
5) I suggest an orangey lighting sun effect (not to strong like it's Autumn/fall) when your outside. (This lighting color is just an opinion and an example, you can use any color (not to crazy) to give it more of a...colorful effect instead the bland color without lighting regular mine-imator gives us. I hope you understand what I mean.)