my fad music video music by thelivingtombstone

[unshapedloki 5]

the first part is borning but watch the hole thing it gets good

Edited November 11, 2016 by unshapedloki

[SB7989 609]

half the time that the robots(?) were singing, all I could imagine them actually saying was "AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA"

[unshapedloki 5]

1 minute ago, SB7989 said:

half the time that the robots(?) were singing, all I could imagine them actually saying was "AYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA"

i know did you like it

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

You posted this already.

[unshapedloki 5]

1 minute ago, Ethan. said:

You posted this already.

i know but it wont let me go to that page so i made a new one

[SB7989 609]

33 minutes ago, unshapedloki said:

i know did you like it

well.. it could use /lots/ of improvement.

[[GMK]animations 17]

Needs A LOT of improvement and from looking at you channel you look like a jerky Pokemon go kid...

Great.

[Patrick 1.7k]

Some of the parts weren't that bad although this needs a lot of improvements.

Camera Movement. The camera moved way to much, and try to use the instant transition some times.

Movements. Try using different transitions.

Lip Syncing. The lip syncing in this weren't great, take more time into them.

 

This is good for a beginner but please use more time in your animations. 

Also, alot of people hate fad here 

Edited November 11, 2016 by Patrick

[unshapedloki 5]

On 11/10/2016 at 7:01 PM, SB7989 said:

well.. it could use /lots/ of improvement.

i would like you to do better

14 hours ago, Patrick said:

Some of the parts weren't that bad although this needs a lot of improvements.

Camera Movement. The camera moved way to much, and try to use the instant transition some times.

Movements. Try using different transitions.

Lip Syncing. The lip syncing in this weren't great, take more time into them.

 

This is good for a beginner but please use more time in your animations. 

Also, alot of people hate fad here 

by the way im 12 but thanks i gas 

[Patrick 1.7k]

5 hours ago, unshapedloki said:

i would like you to do better

by the way im 12 but thanks i gas 

He just told you that you need to improve on your animating, no need to try to roast him.

[unshapedloki 5]

On 11/10/2016 at 6:29 PM, Ethan. said:

You posted this already.

 

8 hours ago, Patrick said:

He just told you that you need to improve on your animating, no need to try to roast him.

 

8 hours ago, Patrick said:

He just told you that you need to improve on your animating, no need to try to roast him.

i know but you couldint of just said good job i have worked hard on this  and people are only point in out the bad things there are way worse minecraft F.N.A.F music videos out there

On 11/11/2016 at 6:52 AM, Patrick said:

Some of the parts weren't that bad although this needs a lot of improvements.

Camera Movement. The camera moved way to much, and try to use the instant transition some times.

Movements. Try using different transitions.

Lip Syncing. The lip syncing in this weren't great, take more time into them.

 

This is good for a beginner but please use more time in your animations. 

Also, alot of people hate fad here 

i dont know way people would come here if they hate F.N.A.F 

[Patrick 1.7k]

1 hour ago, unshapedloki said:

 

 

i know but you couldint of just said good job i have worked hard on this  and people are only point in out the bad things there are way worse minecraft F.N.A.F music videos out there

i dont know way people would come here if they hate F.N.A.F 

Maybe he didn't like this animation?

You should always look for bad things, to see what you can improve on.

Also.

They come to hate or give you actual critisism.