Elytra

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

so this is a Short Animation About Elytra

Enjoy

 

[Holy Knight 479]

Maybe hide the flatlands with fog.

That's really all I can say.

[-(Retro)- 394]

Lol, That was pretty good.

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

Just now, -(Retro)- said:

Lol, That was pretty good.

thank you.

[Anatoli 769]

i mean, u tried. remove the intro 

[PigmanMovie 1.8k]

1 minute ago, BlueYoshi73 said:

i mean, u tried. remove the intro 

i use intro because i uploaded it in youtube

 

1 minute ago, BlueYoshi73 said:

i mean, u tried. remove the intro 

i always use intro when i uploaded it to youtube

[Anatoli 769]

dont have your intro on animations and also get a new intro:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTRoRynMuRatmQN4DcE1SWA

[Mafa Animations 2.9k]

The posing and fhe camera angles were pretty good, however the animation lacked transitions and fog.

[Caeden117 1.8k]

59 minutes ago, BlueYoshi73 said:

dont have your intro on animations and also get a new intro:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCTRoRynMuRatmQN4DcE1SWA

Using a template really only makes it worse...

Anyways, the movement needs to be improved alot (I dont mind the instant transitions of when you hit the tree and ground though), and you need to not show the flatlands some how (More scenery, fog, etc.)

[JDeviloAnimates 42]

That was actually quite good!

[Tacocat the Animator 149]

Decent, but the crash scene... cringe

Also the intro... cringe

Also the almost everything else... also cringe

I think it could've been done better if it used transitions and added scenery, plus the character not clipping through the ground when they landed.

nice job using DoF tho