Only a fish

[hpbrsp 15]

My first animation

 

"Only a fish"

 

[BBruce7815 2k]

very good! i love it!

[Ninjabee_Redtricity 989]

For a first timer, this is actually not pretty bad, not cringy or lazy made like how most of us started, I think the only thing you may have improved is the walk cycle and add DOF, everything else, it actually looks pretty nice L:

Improve on lighting wise, I think it's something KOC can mention, if he decides to comment :/

 

[hpbrsp 15]

4 minutes ago, Ninjabee_Redtricity said:

For a first timer, this is actually not pretty bad, not cringy or lazy made like how most of us started, I think the only thing you may have improved is the walk cycle and add DOF, everything else, it actually looks pretty nice L:

Improve on lighting wise, I think it's something KOC can mention, if he decides to comment :/

 

 

thank you for the tips

[crustyjpeg 2.7k]

And you call that a "first animation"????

 

That, was beautiful.

[Rollo 3.2k]

This is very good for a first animation! I especially like the camera work. But it could do with some music.

[Artamiel Crescent 1.5k]

Me likey

[Anatoli 769]

you know, i don't normally like peoples post. but when i do, its cause it was ok.