Thoughts? <criticism is nice, just don't be rude>

[Knightrider1006 10]

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Credit: I tried using links but i failed many times 

Skibbz face rig, Spawn Médieval schematic from: www.minecraft-schematics.com and Waluiqi's Knight sword model

 

Worked all day on this, Probably my most proud creation, but i feel i can do better with tips and such, but thoughts on how it looks?

[YourNormalPersonDavi 230]

if its night then why the cloud is white, it should be less black.

[Extro 762]

Torches need more light lol

try putting point lights on the torches, setting the brightness to around 10, and turn render shadows off. That should do the trick.

[Knightrider1006 10]

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1 minute ago, DuallyElemental said:

Torches need more light lol

try putting point lights on the torches, setting the brightness to around 10, and turn render shadows off. That should do the trick.

 

Noted! Thank you, i would change it up right now but for some odd reason my project file was missing when i got up this morning

[TheJeweledWolf 595]

It looks pretty good, but I do recommend watching a lighting turtorial. They are extremely helpful. 

[Mineshaft Animation 1.1k]

So basically we’ve gotten to the point where fairly new mine-imator users are asking and maybe demanding for constructive criticism instead of opinions and tips which they call “rude”... I blame you for this @9redwoods, sue me

[Knightrider1006 10]

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9 minutes ago, Mineshaft Animation said:

So basically we’ve gotten to the point where fairly new mine-imator users are asking and maybe demanding for constructive criticism instead of opinions and tips which they call “rude”... I blame you for this @9redwoods, sue me

 

In lack of a Gg react option i shall put it here

GG

[Rawami 319]

Good job for a beginner but he's too expresseive.