[HD] wait.....

[Skelemelon 124]

a test.....so tips, how to use curves and stuff, im Über new to animating, like this is my first one

[LolDoge 718]

Not only is the animation too fast not smooth enough for me and its overall bad but the camera transition is bad, you didn't even use the instant transistion!

[NietyFox 5.5k]

36 minutes ago, LolDoge said:

Not only is the animation too fast not smooth enough for me and its overall bad but the camera transition is bad, you didn't even use the instant transistion!

Keep in mind, he's new...

[LolDoge 718]

39 minutes ago, NietyFox said:

Keep in mind, he's new...

Keep in mind, I don't care, it still, to ME, looks like he didn't put effort into it.

[Twelvie 374]

tbh It doesnt look that bad

[TheLuigiNoidMan 130]

5 minutes ago, LolDoge said:

Keep in mind, I don't care, it still, to ME, looks like he didn't put effort into it.

Looking at my old animations. Huh. 

[Nakoju 615]

Overall this is pretty well done. Heres the stuff you should look out for:

1. Make sure to use instant transitions when moving a long distance real fast to clean it up a little.

2. Transitions to all the different scenes look a bit too sped up, try easing into all the stages of what your making.

3. Don't use flatlands, backgrounds add to what your doing, especially if the background is fitting and pleasant to the eyes.

4. Some actions aren't synced up correctly.

5. Steve's poses aren't really life-like. 

There ya go.