Even more practice

[FallenChaser 77]

 

More practice 

Made this in about 5-7 hours today.

Do I still need to ask for criticism? :l

Edited January 21, 2016 by FallenChaser

[Skjold 7.6k]

The flatlands cringe is real

[FallenChaser 77]

1 minute ago, Skjold said:

The flatlands cringe is real

._. 

 

[Skjold 7.6k]

1 hour ago, Keep on Chucking said:

+Movements are 'decent'

-flatland

-S suit

-scream sound effect

-bad cinematography

... there's a lot to improve really.

-steve

[Darwfer 47]

fix those camera angles and try to have more unique armor and weapons

[Marten 628]

9 hours ago, Skjold said:

The flatlands cringe is real

ye

[FallenChaser 77]

8 hours ago, Keep on Chucking said:

+Movements are 'decent'

-flatland

-S suit

-scream sound effect

-bad cinematography

... there's a lot to improve really.

Would prefer more specific criticism and not just little things and being stereotyped.

[Ninjabee_Redtricity 989]

Animation is not bad,I think a bit of Natural standing still movements (Like fingers,Arms and back slightly moving a bit,rather then a stale statue) and a bit of camera bobbing can do some epic Improvement!

Because its a test,il respect the animation with not having a background.

Their no hate,Suit rig,still looks awesome!

Edited January 22, 2016 by Ninjabee_Redtricity