Animation Test 2

[Animator Dark 992]

Tell Me What i Need to change Please tell me nicely 

[Skjold 7.6k]

Legit.

[Animator Dark 992]

Just now, Skjold said:

Legit.

Do i Need to change anything 

[Marty McFly 1k]

1 minute ago, Animator Dark said:

Do i Need to change anything 

That was a face of approval.

[Animator Dark 992]

Just now, Marty McFly said:

That was a face of approval.

what do u mean

 

[Skjold 7.6k]

Just now, Animator Dark said:

Do i Need to change anything 

Well, The cut into first person was pretty rough.. But thats more cinematography stuff.

[Animator Dark 992]

Just now, Skjold said:

Well, The cut into first person was pretty rough.. But thats more cinematography stuff.

i will work on it 

[Just_five_fun 53]

Good Work. I don't see anything 'wrong' with it, but I might suggest a few areas where you could focus if you want to improve it.

From the point of jumping on to the pressure plate until the end, Steve is rather rigid. Jumping, placing a block, and falling could all be more stylized. This isn't really a matter of right or wrong, but telling a story with movements.

I can tell you already spent some time on it. I look forward to seeing more from you.

[Joshdotmp4 2.8k]

Your skills are getting better, slowly and surely, I'll tell you that, but don't get overzealous.
Remember that good animation takes time, and don't be pressured by wanting to release an animation every day or two.

To address the animation itself: You are getting better. Camera movement and lighting can definitely use some work, plus some of the character movements were good but not necessarily smooth or fluent. The story the animation tells doesn't really flow very well with a seemingly random 1st person part and randomly building a bridge in the sky, but it is excusable because it's just a test. Other than that, there's just a little bit of physics issues which make things a bit unrealistic.

Edited December 26, 2015 by Joshinja ( ಠ ͜ʖಠ)

[Animator Dark 992]

1 minute ago, Joshinja ( ಠ ͜ʖಠ) said:

Your skills are getting better, slowly and surely, I'll tell you that, but don't get overzealous.
Remember that good animation takes time, and don't be pressured by wanting to release an animation every day or two.

To address the animation itself: You are getting better. Camera movement and lighting can definitely use some work, plus some of the character movements were good but not necessarily smooth or fluent. The story the animation tells doesn't really flow very well with a seemingly random 1st person part and randomly building a pillar in the sky, but it is excusable because it's just a test. Other than that, there's just a little bit of physics issues which make things a bit unrealistic.

Minecraft Physics don't make sense 

[Joshdotmp4 2.8k]

Just now, Animator Dark said:

Minecraft Physics don't make sense 

I know, and they don't have to, but the way you animated the character doesn't look realistic because of leverage being unused in most parts

[Animator Dark 992]

Just now, Joshinja ( ಠ ͜ʖಠ) said:

I know, and they don't have to, but the way you animated the character doesn't look realistic because of leverage being unused in most parts

Remember a that i am still learning mine imator Please

[Joshdotmp4 2.8k]

Just now, Animator Dark said:

Remember a that i am still learning mine imator Please

Yes I know that's why I'm giving constructive criticism to help you improve  

[Animator Dark 992]

Just now, Joshinja ( ಠ ͜ʖಠ) said:

Yes I know that's why I'm giving constructive criticism to help you improve