Jailed Freedom

[jimbo 11]

Well, here is my latest animation!

Been working on it for AGES, but its been on and off and off and on and off, if ya know what I mean.

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

Ya done good. Very nice understanding of personality, but I do wish the setting and plot were a little more developed. The animation was fine, and though it wasn't spectacular, you tried to pay attention to detail. Good job.  

[jimbo 11]

Take notice of the "Part 1" in the description. Part 2 is another part of the prison, same with Part 3.

[Garnet638 785]

I have way too many questions

[jimbo 11]

I have way too many questions

Then you may as well get started.... Ask away!

[Magicmaan775 161]

Are you named after the BBQ restaraunt?

[XanderTheV 214]

Each chars personality are clear, nice..

The detail is good, but why would you use thick pitch black fog, scientifically it is never exist except the camera is under blindness effect. Thus the camera movement is good. I havea a suggestion, mess around with transition, and i will expect the second episode with improved animation. i wrote this on mobile so ecpect some ttypos

 

 

 

 

[jimbo 11]

Are you named after the BBQ restaraunt?

No. Jimbo is a nickname for my real name, which is Jimmy.

Each chars personality are clear, nice..

The detail is good, but why would you use thick pitch black fog, scientifically it is never exist except the camera is under blindness effect. Thus the camera movement is good. I havea a suggestion, mess around with transition, and i will expect the second episode with improved animation. i wrote this on mobile so ecpect some ttypos

 

 

 

 

Thanks.  I never really thought about the color of the fog. When I first added it in, I just wanted an extra effect for the camera. Plus I had never really used it in an animation. I chose black cuz I wanted to give the prison a creepy/ depressing/ darker feel to it. Also, A last minute edit was that the characters had some effect on it. (Watch closely when the "Hobo" says "NEVER!!")

[XanderTheV 214]

No. Jimbo is a nickname for my real name, which is Jimmy.

Thanks.  I never really thought about the color of the fog. When I first added it in, I just wanted an extra effect for the camera. Plus I had never really used it in an animation. I chose black cuz I wanted to give the prison a creepy/ depressing/ darker feel to it. Also, A last minute edit was that the characters had some effect on it. (Watch closely when the "Hobo" says "NEVER!!")

oh i see, nausea and blindness effect?

oh a few addition, i am pretty sure u are using 1.0.0, and i see the video quality is not pretty good, i suggest you to press "save (advanced)" then choose lagarith lossless codec,

it will render longer and heavier, and resulting a big file, but u don't have to worry because your video editor can shrink it with less loss when you render the edited video with MPEG codec (still avi. format) (i tested this on flashintegro's video editor, don't know if it works on others too), and there is your detail. (i wrote this on PC so expect 404 error : Typo not found).

That's it.

Edited September 17, 2015 by XanderTheV

[Mielo 405]

Ey! The animation is pretty well done but still need a few improvements. I think u need to work on the camera angles. That's why i think it's better to use a bigger scenery. And also change the style where you put your texts  it's kinda hard to read. Or maybe change the colors. Overall i rate 7/10

[jimbo 11]

oh i see, nausea and blindness effect?

oh a few addition, i am pretty sure u are using 1.0.0, and i see the video quality is not pretty good, i suggest you to press "save (advanced)" then choose lagarith lossless codec,

it will render longer and heavier, and resulting a big file, but u don't have to worry because your video editor can shrink it with less loss when you render the edited video with MPEG codec (still avi. format) (i tested this on flashintegro's video editor, don't know if it works on others too), and there is your detail. (i wrote this on PC so expect 404 error : Typo not found).

That's it.

Er, no. I just think that it kinda gives a moldy and dark feel to it. I honestly didn't put much thought into WHY it was there other than just to help focus the camera a bit and add a creeping feeling to everything.

Ok. I have Lagarith, but I didn't think it was worth that extra time. I'll try it out next time around though.

Ey! The animation is pretty well done but still need a few improvements. I think u need to work on the camera angles. That's why i think it's better to use a bigger scenery. And also change the style where you put your texts  it's kinda hard to read. Or maybe change the colors. Overall i rate 7/10

Yeah, the camera angles could've been worked on harder.  And yea, if I could edit it easily I would change the text. Maybe just add it after I've rendered it and stuff. Thanks!