Oh boy...
Everyone's gonna be real hateful of you.
Still, not bad. There are some concerns: lighting, fad, and action.
There's no lighting, which makes the animation poorly qualified.
Fad is bad, and almost everyone hates it.
There is little to no action, and it seems you were lazy doing it.
However, upvote for begineer vid. And one more thing: you need to stop posting things.