The Command Block a minecraft animation

[peeps4321 21]

Just finished a new animation....feed back if you have any would be appreciated.

 

[Ninja Dino 1.2k]

Wow! This is really good. Here's some things you could improve on though.

- The walking animation is pretty good, the only thing is that sometimes it looks like he's gliding or ice skating.

- The frame rate should be improved. People usually render their animations in 24-30 frames per second.

- Sometimes in the background the flatlands and blank sky can be seen like at 0:42. You can fix this by using DOF in the camera, and decreasing the fog distance.

- The shadows aren't bad, but they could be made better. Try watching some tutorials on YouTube or even on the forums to make them better.

Overall this animation is really good! It's way better than most that I see on the forums. You did a pretty good job. Can't wait to see what you create in the future!

[peeps4321 21]

2 minutes ago, Ninja Dino said:

Wow! This is really good. Here's some things you could improve on though.

- The walking animation is pretty good, the only thing is that sometimes it looks like he's gliding or ice skating.

- The frame rate should be improved. People usually render their animations in 24-30 frames per second.

- Sometimes in the background the flatlands and blank sky can be seen like at 0:42. You can fix this by using DOF in the camera, and decreasing the fog distance.

- The shadows aren't bad, but they could be made better. Try watching some tutorials on YouTube or even on the forums to make them better.

Overall this animation is really good! It's way better than most that I see on the forums. You did a pretty good job. Can't wait to see what you create in the future!

Thanks for the advice

[castedshadow98 905]

I must say this is amazing. Honestly, your style of animation is yours to mess with. However, the only thing was... it was too good for a beginner 

Great job, keep up the good work 

[peeps4321 21]

2 minutes ago, castedshadow98 said:

I must say this is amazing. Honestly, your style of animation is yours to mess with. However, the only thing was... it was too good for a beginner 

Great job, keep up the good work 

Thanks,  that really does mean a lot.

[Kapslock 692]

That's really good, but you should check out this:

 

[peeps4321 21]

1 minute ago, Iron431 said:

That's really good, but you should check out this:

 

ok

[DizzyProductions 534]

Use your own walk cycles next time

[Nerdinq 225]

It didn't have a strong story. Ex. Why did he leave his house to go sleep in a tent, then walks into a temple

[Ethaniel 15.2k]

14 minutes ago, Nerdinq said:

It didn't have a strong story. Ex. Why did he leave his house to go sleep in a tent, then walks into a temple

I saw a story. He left his house on a two month journey, in that two months he had been camping out along the way. He's woken up by something, he's close. He keeps walking until he gets to the temple, the temple has the command block and then he dies.

[peeps4321 21]

16 minutes ago, Nerdinq said:

It didn't have a strong story. Ex. Why did he leave his house to go sleep in a tent, then walks into a temple

fair enough,  i will work on story.

1 hour ago, DizzyProductions said:

Use your own walk cycles next time

ok...I will try

[peeps4321 21]

1 minute ago, TheFastFilms said:

First of all, this is the best animation from a newbie I've seen. Although some stuff like Lighting, and framerate need to be worked on, it is great

thanks, i will work on these

[peeps4321 21]

1 minute ago, TheFastFilms said:

Another thing is it's not very smooth, but yeah. Good luck with your next project!

thanks