Halloween Animation (First Animation)

[AceAnimations 15]

I KNOW,I KNOW IT'S NOT HALLOWEEN YET,almost one month to go,but I just came back into Mine-imator since I left a year ago,that video that was 6 seconds long got ELEVEN THOUSAND VIEW! I knew I could do better and that was when Mine-imator wasn't AS good as it is now,PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE,Don't be scared to critisize(cant spell it)  me,I really want to know how to be better,say if it was the sound out of place or walking anything,Enjoy and make sure to give me advice!It will go private in a day or two so check it out now!

 

 

[AceAnimations 15]

1 minute ago, TheFastFilms said:

Good for returning after a year

Do you have any criticism for me?Perhaps something I need to improve on,the flow?Camera tricks?Thanks 

[willingsas 1.9k]

Work on the pace. Some parts are too long for what they are.

[NietyFox 5.5k]

30 minutes ago, TheFastFilms said:

Good for returning after a year

*sniff*

I smell sarcasm

[Nickolias 214]

From what I can tell, a kid finds ghosts or something on Halloween. Did I get it right?
Also, for criticism...           ...           ...don't use running presets. And also, as a rule for all animation, add sound and movement to everything. But I don't do that so....

[AceAnimations 15]

The basics of it was that he gets scared by a kid,runs into a random house,then he sees it was just a trick or treater (CHest with food),another person knocks on door and its a killer,he faints  But what do you mean dont use running presets?The animation that Mine-imator already gives me?Thanks tho!

[Anatoli 769]

what?