THE bank robbery test (unfinished)

[N_WOLF 4]

希望你們給一些建議。   小白讓我和來自香港。如果我的句子和詞是錯誤的。非常抱歉

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OSlIL0vXx10

 

Edited August 6, 2016 by N_WOLF

[Czai Knight 434]

Its pretty good!

Just work on the camera movement, and slow down the camera pace when it moves from target to target, the scenery is good, the walk cycle could use some improvement, put more effort on the background such as the people from 0:18 to 0:19.

This is basically all the info I have to give but overall its pretty good.

[NietyFox 5.5k]

Stiff poses.

Why have you forsaken me god.

[Twelvie 374]

the good old day of it looking good but not cuz of linear (+watermark)

[Rollo 3.2k]

The eyepiece thingy is pretty cool. But you should make the torches look like they are giving light, slow down the movements, use transitions other than linear, pose the characters better, start effects at the correct times, upgrade your Mine-imator, aaand das it from me.

[Juno 4.5k]

TRANSLATION:
 

希望你們給一些建議。   小白讓我和來自香港。如果我的句子和詞是錯誤的。非常抱歉
Hope you give some suggestions. : S White and me from Hong Kong. If my sentence, and Word is wrong. I'm terribly sorry