Elimanate 1 (Preview/Teaser)

[MrJeanDoesMineImator 164]

Can you maybe tell me what to improve on this Preview/Teaser?

[EliteBlueSniper 115]

Elimanate is spelled wrong. It's Eliminate.

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

Oh, does The Tan James inspire you as well?  

[MrJeanDoesMineImator 164]

no about those trees no i just thought about it 

16 minutes ago, Emanatronic said:

Oh, does The Tan James inspire you as well?  

No..........if you're talking about those trees kinda ..\

[BBruce7815 2k]

10 minutes ago, MrJeanDoesMineImator said:

no about those trees no i just thought about it 

No..........if you're talking about those trees kinda ..\

it means @The Tan James, he does mgb's (fighting animations)

[RandomAnimatorMan 65]

Slightly more wind effect on the trees to match the sound

The sheer strength of the radial blur is a bit much.

Like I used to, you think that a small amount of blur extending the color of the character looks good, but trust me, you want the blur to not touch the character unless it is fully engulfing said character.

For the first character the blur need only be moved a little bit, but for the second one, act as if the camera is a real camera, it should focus on the entire character and his colors and edges should look sharp, otherwise the camera focusing does not work in the animation.

Also, removing the one character's foot from the tree at the start of his movement as it is clipping and does not seem real.

That being said, although the blur is a bit strong in it, the opening shot is very nicely done and the ambient noise is very nice.

Edited May 6, 2016 by RandomAnimatorMan
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