[Animation] Lonely

[VinCen 17]

This my second animation. Please give me feedback for this animation , thank you  

[That Enderman 54]

The scenery is pretty good, I like the choice of music, but the walk cycle and animation is a bit choppy. I recommend watching Alan Becker's tutorial videos on the 12 principals of animation and his video on walk cycles (Link to his first video on the 1st principal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=haa7n3UGyDc, watch the whole series)

 

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

You animation needs a little practice, but your vision is superb.  

[TheBlackGuard 5]

Great music and scenery. 

[geotrax2001 399]

timing...

you need to work on timing (mostly)

also what @That Enderman said, the walk was a little choppy...

but i could tell you understand what a passing, and contact poses are, which is a great start!

[Skjold 7.6k]

0:00 - Oh this actually looks like it will be a nice well-done cinematic..

0:05 - Who's this dude? They look like BdoubleO100

0:10 - UGH  THAT ANIMATION *vomits* 

1:05 - wait wtf? the tone just took a 180. what the heck is going on?!

1:20 - lenseflare overload

 

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This has been my summary of this animation :3

[KindZax 1.3k]

I do not usually "like" animations with choppy movements but this is different, sure the animation needs some work but the overall message is outstanding. What you did is something most people (even so called "experts") can sometimes not achieve, the connection to the viewer.

[VinCen 17]

8 hours ago, That Enderman said:

The scenery is pretty good, I like the choice of music, but the walk cycle and animation is a bit choppy. I recommend watching Alan Becker's tutorial videos on the 12 principals of animation and his video on walk cycles (Link to his first video on the 1st principal: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=haa7n3UGyDc, watch the whole series)

 

 

7 hours ago, geotrax2001 said:

timing...

you need to work on timing (mostly)

also what @That Enderman said, the walk was a little choppy...

but i could tell you understand what a passing, and contact poses are, which is a great start!

 

7 hours ago, Emanatronic said:

You animation needs a little practice, but your vision is superb.  

okay.. thanks for giving me feedback  i will make better at timing 

6 hours ago, Skjold said:

0:00 - Oh this actually looks like it will be a nice well-done cinematic..

0:05 - Who's this dude? They look like BdoubleO100

0:10 - UGH  THAT ANIMATION *vomits* 

1:05 - wait wtf? the tone just took a 180. what the heck is going on?!

1:20 - lenseflare overload

 

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This has been my summary of this animation :3

haha .. in the ending , he wake up from the bad dream

5 hours ago, KindZax said:

I do not usually "like" animations with choppy movements but this is different, sure the animation needs some work but the overall message is outstanding. What you did is something most people (even so called "experts") can sometimes not achieve, the connection to the viewer.

yeah thanks dude  i really appreciate that 

7 hours ago, DeathZone said:

Great music and scenery. 

Thanks man  

[Emaniplex 6.3k]

6 hours ago, Skjold said:

0:00 - Oh this actually looks like it will be a nice well-done cinematic..

0:05 - Who's this dude? They look like BdoubleO100

0:10 - UGH  THAT ANIMATION *vomits* 

1:05 - wait wtf? the tone just took a 180. what the heck is going on?!

1:20 - lenseflare overload

 

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This has been my summary of this animation :3

Give newbies some lenience dude, I wish I could animate like that starting off.

[VinCen 17]

10 hours ago, Emanatronic said:

Give newbies some lenience dude, I wish I could animate like that starting off.

haha. yeah thanks it doesn't matter for me

Edited April 18, 2016 by VinCen

[Sturk 128]

On 4/17/2016 at 11:25 PM, Skjold said:

0:00 - Oh this actually looks like it will be a nice well-done cinematic..

0:05 - Who's this dude? They look like BdoubleO100

0:10 - UGH  THAT ANIMATION *vomits* 

1:05 - wait wtf? the tone just took a 180. what the heck is going on?!

1:20 - lenseflare overload

 

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This has been my summary of this animation :3

Uh.. How about you give him some tips and suggestions.. He is just a new animator.. Dont go on bashing him. He is better than most of the newbie animators..

[Skjold 7.6k]

On 5/8/2016 at 0:39 PM, Sturk said:

Uh.. How about you give him some tips and suggestions.. He is just a new animator.. Dont go on bashing him. He is better than most of the newbie animators..

How about you don't comment on a month-old post?

[Sturk 128]

3 hours ago, Skjold said:

How about you don't comment on a month-old post?

It doesnt matter when i commented. I am stating that you are being a jerk in a Newbie's Post.