Alex And Steve

[Kyubi_Hitashi 25]

[MoltenLapizza 270]

I noticed some things in the image and I'd like to point them out.

• BROKEN HIP.
• The way Alex pose looks weird, I'm fine with the arms but the legs are weird.
• Their expressions look too bland. 
• There's too much bloom in the sky.
• and if you're going to keep the bloom, atleast have some backlight for Alex and an overall better lighting to match up with the bloom's brightness. (Just don't overdo it)

Hope you can use these points to improve on the next post.

[Kyubi_Hitashi 25]

@MoltenLapizzaThanks for pointing them out, im still Relearning animation due to being years without practicing, i'll try to play more often with some tools from MI and image editing for some next images

[LacaMenDRY 1.3k]

Nah one thing:The Eyebrows doesn't really match the skin of both of the eye. Hope you can fix it.

[Kyubi_Hitashi 25]

@LacaMenDRYyou mean the eyebrows that are kinda looks like they merged with alex's Hair on the left side or steve too?

[soniccraft 17]

make the brows oranges or something

 

 

[LacaMenDRY 1.3k]

6 hours ago, Kyubi_Hitashi said:

@LacaMenDRYyou mean the eyebrows that are kinda looks like they merged with alex's Hair on the left side or steve too?

Yes.