cartoon Christmas special! (Cartoon style, slow motion & lip sync test)

[TheMCYoshi 23]

Hey guys!

I spent quite a while on this animation, and tried out a few new things I'v never done before, (cartoon style running, slow motion scenes, lip syncing)

This is only my 4th/5th animation I'v made so I would love some feedback on how to improve for next time!

thank you!

[CatOnCaffeine 646]

Not bad for a beginners animation. Keep trying!

[DizzyProductions 534]

1 hour ago, CatOnCaffeine said:

Not bad for a beginners animation. Keep trying!

pretty harsh, but fair 

[Mike 3.4k]

Biggest problem with it, there's little to no scenery. Also the snowflakes are too big, it's only snowing in one place and this is taking place on a relatively clear day.

Other then that I enjoyed it 

[willingsas 1.9k]

Those big, wide, unblinking eyes are giving me the creeps. And to top it all out, the faint smile.

I couldn't make it to the end of the video.

[TheMCYoshi 23]

6 hours ago, Mike said:

Biggest problem with it, there's little to no scenery. Also the snowflakes are too big, it's only snowing in one place and this is taking place on a relatively clear day.

Other then that I enjoyed it 

Ah yea, I thought about that, but unfortunately at the moment my computer is too slow to add in too much scenery or effects, once i get a better computer i will do!