SimonAndJames [ Wallpaper ]

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

[Jovan0896 666]

When the image loaded up the website was scrolled up all the way and I thought the antagonists were destroying the city and this was like a sneak peek of your series.

[Rollo 3.2k]

1. His axe is a different resolution than literally everything else in the wallpaper.
2. The dude on the right's baseball bat is just a schematic isn't it? Even if it's not, it's texture is still strange-looking compared to everything else in the wallpaper.
3. The girls and the dude on the right's arms go through their torsos, and to me that is not too appealing.
4. Simon's pose seems a little awkward.
5. Simon's axe is going through his shirt sleeve.
6. The guy with the brown hair's gun doesn't contrast enough with his suit. Maybe add some sort of light source nearby?
7. The glowstone isn't glowing.
8. The dude on the right's knee's texture is flipped and stretchy and weird.
9. Are they unaware that the village behind them is literally being attacketed by titans?
10. Simon and James have mouths and no one else does?
11. The guy with the brown hair has different pupils than everyone else.
12. Simon and James's eyes are also different than everyone else.

But besides all that, most of their poses are pretty dynamic, the DOF is pretty good, and you did a good job of making the antagonists look ominous and powerful.

 

And no, I have not seen your series so I do not know if any of this is normal for your wallpapers/animations.

Edited September 30, 2016 by Colonel Muffin

[NietyFox 5.5k]

9 minutes ago, Colonel Muffin said:

1.  
2. The dude on the right's knee's texture is flipped and stretchy and weird.
3. Are they unaware that the village behind them is literally being attacketed by titans?
4. Simon and James have mouths and no one else does?
5. The guy with the brown hair has different pupils than everyone else.
6. Simon and James's eyes are also different than everyone else.

*I don't know why 1. is blank in the quote ._.

2. Mine-imator does that, I don't know why.

3. The village isn't being "attacketed" by titans.

4. That really doesn't matter, so doesn't 5 and 6.

[Rollo 3.2k]

1 minute ago, NietyFox said:

2. Mine-imator does that, I don't know why.

3. The village isn't being "attacketed" by titans.

4. That really doesn't matter, so doesn't 5 and 6.

2. Ah okay, that's what I figured.

3. Like I said, I haven't seen his series.

4. Well, it does to me otherwise I wouldn't have pointed it out.

[Jaytience 258]

I like it.

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

3 hours ago, Jazz Scout said:

I like it.

Then let me ask, why do you like it?

[Jaytience 258]

6 hours ago, Simon G. Andersen said:

Then let me ask, why do you like it?

I like everything. Mainly because it's just so much better than the stuff I produce. The only thing I have an advantage with is comedy. I can't do storylines, I'm a wreck at that stuff, I can't do after effects, they always end up looking like crap, I can't do character creation without creating a story for each of the characters 25 episodes before they even appear, and everything I do tends to get scrapped. (R.I.P. Blinded by the Myst you were a good series concept.) I don't know, to be honest, I just admire people who can actually put on a series without stressing themselves out over little details and oh my God, I'm driving myself insane.