Still working on it, want feedback

[MysticalGamez 7]

This is the animation I've been working on for about 4 days now. Tell me how it looks and what i can maybe do to make it looks better (the final thing i will add is a reason WHY for what's going on).

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This isn't very good at all.

 

There's no transitions.

the idle animation is bad.

The roblox dude didn't get pushed back by the bullets and fell the wrong way when he died.

Nothing felt very fluid or smooth.

In short:is very bad.

 

 

Go watch some SKIBBZ.

Edited December 16, 2017 by EnderSculptor

[MysticalGamez 7]

3 minutes ago, EnderSculptor said:

This isn't very good at all.

 

There's no transitions.

the idle animation is bad.

The roblox dude didn't get pushed back by the bullets and fell the wrong way when he died.

Nothing felt very fluid or smooth.

In short:is very bad.

Thanks for the feedback! Thankfully I'm not done with it yet so I can easily edit it. I'll try to make the idle animation better, make the robloxian die correctly, and try to use transitions.

[TwoToRule 505]

The movements are for the most part too slow.

[MysticalGamez 7]

1 minute ago, Twotorule said:

The movements are for the most part too slow.

I can easily change the tempo up. Thanks for the feedback!

[Red 42]

It's a bit too slow, when the roblox dude got shot he didn't react at all, and when he died he should have fallen backwards.