My First Ever Animation

[PersianNemesis 3]

Hello guys i would love for you all to view this animation and suggest areas of improvements, as this will help me in so many ways for my future animations. Thank You

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_5Ee_FbMLM4

[Frossa 2.3k]

The walking could have used a little twitching, and the battle was too slow. But nice work other than that

[eeveewemmy 137]

nice for a first one but have to agree with frossa but anyway awesome animation +1 keep animating

[Fighter 1.2k]

Nice for a first one. And I agree with the others. +1

 

I don't know why someone gived you a -1...

[PersianNemesis 3]

The walking could have used a little twitching, and the battle was too slow. But nice work other than that

 

Thank you ill make sure that i fix the walking for my next one and increase battle time, i shall also add facial rigs too

Nice for a first one. And I agree with the others. +1

 

I don't know why someone gived you a -1...

 

Your skins look interesting and i will be pleased if i could you use for my future animations.

[Fighter 1.2k]

Your skins look interesting and i will be pleased if i could you use for my future animations.

 

You can use them if you want but don't forget to give me credit for using my skins.

[Ayhay 2.4k]

Too long on the snoring I'd say but it's a nice animation, simple storyline, not bad for a first. Much like Frossa, the walking needs to be improved. +1 for a good effort.

[PersianNemesis 3]

You can use them if you want but don't forget to give me credit for using my skins.

 

Wouldn't Forget, Thank you.