my new series, episode 1

[lifecraft 410]

just to be clear, this is not an island series!

 

this was meant to be longer but I couldn't find anyone to help me, any tips?

I still need help for the series, if you're interested in helping then click on this link for details-

 http://www.mineimatorforums.com/index.php?/topic/64270-need-assistance-for-my-new-series-not-an-island-series/

Edited March 13, 2017 by lifecraft

[Anatoli 769]

gotta be honest here. animation was not up to par.

[lifecraft 410]

3 minutes ago, BlueYoshi73 said:

gotta be honest here. animation was not up to par.

it was meant to be better but i couldn't get help to polish it.... it was also meant to be longer, but i couldn't get help with that either.... so this was the best i could do, it took about a week, this was the best i could do.... i also only had a week beacuse i put that as the release date. i should have given myself more time.... but i'll admit i could have done much better....

[MrJeanDoesMineImator 164]

can me be friend with you?

[lifecraft 410]

1 minute ago, MrJeanDoesMineImator said:

can me be friend with you?

what? 

[MrJeanDoesMineImator 164]

1 minute ago, lifecraft said:

what? 

Let me correct my grammer(I did it on purpose) Can I be friends with you?

 

[lifecraft 410]

1 minute ago, MrJeanDoesMineImator said:

Let me correct my grammar(I did it on purpose) Can I be friends with you?

sure

[Czai Knight 434]

In my opinion, you do not really need help to polish. You could go polish it yourself which is something you need to learn anyways.

Lighting seems to be very lacking in this.

There is also a lack of transition and keyframes.

Scenery was okay.

Camera movement was to linear.

Overall, it's okay to start a series because it improves your animation skills as long as you know what you're doing. Spend more time to on each episode (my recommendation)

Hoped this helped 

[lifecraft 410]

3 minutes ago, Czai Knight said:

In my opinion, you do not really need help to polish. You could go polish it yourself which is something you need to learn anyways.

Lighting seems to be very lacking in this.

There is also a lack of transition and keyframes.

Scenery was okay.

Camera movement was to linear.

Overall, it's okay to start a series because it improves your animation skills as long as you know what you're doing. Spend more time to on each episode (my recommendation)

Hoped this helped 

 

thx