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[leo6701 50]

1)physics test

2)intro template

3)bridge battle

Pleshey give me

creative criticisim

[LolDoge 718]

I shall rate your videos and give them a score, mmkay, the score starts at 10.

1st video

-Dat running cycle +1

-That Rope Swing gave me a horrible disease. -2

-Flatlands -1

2nd Video

The guy runs too fast -.5

A faceless Steve -.5 btw its the fact that steve is faceless that I hate

Cancerous Music -.5

"Sample text" -1

Text flying around and shit like in those shitty intros. -2

Last Video

That walk cycle is not smooth enough -.5

Flat Lands -1

Atleast SOME schematics, but not enough to cover the flat lands. +1

The transitions are ugly -1

That one character only has 1 eyebrow and for some reason, I don't like it -.5

That Slow-Motion part is more ugly that Barbra Streisand -1

The way that guy moved his arm trying to kill the other guy is not realistic -.25

 

Right lets do some math:

Calculating the god damn final score:

-0.75

 

What you can do to improve:

• Work on the rope swing, make it more smooth, and make the character not feel like its in a linear floating thingy
• Add schematics and make the fog bigger to hide the flatlands OR disable the flatlands
• Don't make characters run too fast, or too slow, see what looks perfect, because what I saw looked terrible.
• When you add a character, for example, steve in your case, make sure they have a god damn face.
• Don't add cancerous music
• Why sample text? Just...just no sample text, ok?
• Don't make one of those shitty intros that has text flying all over the screen
• Try to make movements more smooth, like, experiment with transitions.
• I know the characters other eyebrow was covered by hair, but, come one, don't only have one eyebrow.
• When you have a slow-motion part, don't make it looks ugly
• Don't make people move their arms like you made that one character move his arm like that

 

 

 

[Enchantek 442]

There are too many things wrong with these three videos for me to point out...

[NotAn... 441]

Dont double post

 

[Proud_AnimatorZ 508]

may i recommend a walk cycle and a run cycle....