Immqrtal VS Steve test animation

[Immqrtal 204]

just a test animation tell me thoughts!

[Mafa Animations 2.9k]

you should really get rid of that intro, a fade in would do nicely.

[Holy Knight 479]

You must really like The Tan James.

Now for some constructive criticism:

1. The intro would look better with a fade effect.

2. Pretty good movement, maybe make it a little quicker and more action packed.

3. Try to get the best camera angles, it's okay for now.

4. Try different music, it could be the same genre if you want, but if The Tan James already put that song in one of his videos then people might think you're ripping him off.

 

I hope that helped. 

[Immqrtal 204]

6 hours ago, Holy Knight said:

You must really like The Tan James.

Now for some constructive criticism:

1. The intro would look better with a fade effect.

2. Pretty good movement, maybe make it a little quicker and more action packed.

3. Try to get the best camera angles, it's okay for now.

4. Try different music, it could be the same genre if you want, but if The Tan James already put that song in one of his videos then people might think you're ripping him off.

 

I hope that helped. 

thank you  and thanks for the advice and i quit animating a long time ago but i was inspired by @The Tan James to start animating again because his animations are so smooth and action/fight packed

and i just wanna work on tests so i can complete something big!