comic DETECTIVE LIGHTNING (Episode #2) "Experiments" (COMIC)

[-StickyMations- 2.6k]

Good, but I think you need to work on your posing (make it more realistic, more "alive" and less robotic).

Also, If I'm honest the story isn't that catchy... but I'll give it a second chance in episode 3.

 

I hope you can make a more interesting story, more catchy and with interesting characters with different personalities.

[The Animator 53]

On 5/15/2016 at 11:43 AM, -StickyMations- said:

Good, but I think you need to work on your posing (make it more realistic, more "alive" and less robotic).

Also, If I'm honest the story isn't that catchy... but I'll give it a second chance in episode 3.

 

I hope you can make a more interesting story, more catchy and with interesting characters with different personalities.

i think he does not know how.. just let him improve for a few more episodes.

[MineRocker Animations 1.4k]

Just now, The Animator said:

i think he does not know how.. just let him improve for a few more episodes.

I know different styles of poses.. But instead of realistic ones I aimed for a comic booky feel.

[Jovan0896 666]

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