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I very much like this!

Pannel three is a little confusing visuals wise. I think the bot needs to stand out more so it is not so very hard to see.

The bloom is a bit strong, not obnoxiously so, and it gives it a "This is a memory" feeling. I hope this is what you were going for. ^_^

Overall it works quite well!

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4 hours ago, Snim said:

Pannel three is a little confusing visuals wise. I think the bot needs to stand out more so it is not so very hard to see.

Pretty much made it so that "It's just a bad memory" or something, darkness usually means bad, but if I state it so, wouldn't the last one be a bad memory? Lets just say in the last part that's where the "memory line" ends.

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