Sniped! my first animation with a plot!

[EnderPixel 18]

Here is my first good animation! Not a wallpaper, not an OC pic. Just an animation. It's probably the first good animation I've made. So here it is:

 

Rigs used: SKIBBZ's 2015 template, a gun from ÜberKiller's armory

[Mr.Matt 824]

nice but you know you can remove the water mark in the setting 

also i suggest you use transitions and make the legs more space out   

[EnderPixel 18]

Thx for the feedback!

 

[Mr.Matt 824]

Just now, EnderPixel said:

Thx for the feedback!

 

no prob 

[J 775]

You have some potential, my friend.

[[OLS]CreeperAnimations 74]

4 minutes ago, J said:

You have some potential, my friend.

hes right

[Simon G. Andersen 2.5k]

The walking animation needs some work. I got a tip to you, move the legs a little bit more than that, and don't forget to move body, arms and the head when characters are walking.

That blood that instantly appears under the character, could've looked much better if you make it look like it flows out from the body.

[EnderPixel 18]

Thank you all for the feedback! I will take all of your suggestions into account!

 

Edited November 21, 2015 by EnderPixel

[AlexTSC 765]

Muzzleflash. 

Edited November 21, 2015 by Alex2806

[EnderPixel 18]

On November 21, 2015 at 11:41:47 AM, Alex2806 said:

Muzzleflash. 

Windows movie maker.